@@ -12,17 +12,18 @@

 <section id="flash">

 <title>Flash Player</title>

  <p>

- Video websites, such as YouTube and Vimeo, make use of the

- Flash Player plugin to display video content. Unfortunately, this

- software operates independently of Tor Browser and cannot easily be

- made to obey Tor Browser’s proxy settings. It can therefore reveal your

- real location and IP address to the website operators, or to an outside

- observer. For this reason, Flash is disabled by default in Tor Browser,

- and enabling it is not recommended.

+ Video websites, such as Vimeo make use of the Flash Player plugin

+ to display video content. Unfortunately, this software operates

+ independently of Tor Browser and cannot easily be made to obey Tor

+ Browser’s proxy settings. It can therefore reveal your real location

+ and IP address to the website operators, or to an outside observer.

+ For this reason, Flash is disabled by default in Tor Browser, and

+ enabling it is not recommended.

  </p>

  <p>

- Some video websites offer alternative video delivery methods that do

- not use Flash. These methods may be compatible with Tor Browser.

+ Some video websites (such as YouTube) offer alternative video delivery

+ methods that do not use Flash. These methods may be compatible with

+ Tor Browser.

  </p>

 </section>

@@ -34,7 +35,7 @@ interactive elements such as video, animation, audio, and status

 timelines. Unfortunately, JavaScript can also enable attacks on the

 security of the browser, which might lead to deanonymization.

 </p>

- 

+

 <p>

 Tor Browser includes an add-on called NoScript, accessed through the

 “S” icon at the top-left of the window, which allows you to control the

@@ -59,7 +60,7 @@ setting is to allow all websites to run scripts.

 Tor Browser is based on Firefox, and any browser add-ons or themes that

 are compatible with Firefox can also be installed in Tor Browser.

 </p>

- 

+

 <p>

 However, the only add-ons that have been tested for use with Tor Browser

 are those included by default. Installing any other browser