Update downloading.page to include review feedback
Colin Childs commited on 2016-10-18 06:20:55
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The safest and simplest way to download Tor Browser is from the official |
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Tor Project website at https://www.torproject.org. Your connection to |
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-the site will be secured using |
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-<link xref='secure-connections'>HTTPS</link>, so you can be sure that no |
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-one is tampering with your copy of the software while you download it. |
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+the site will be secured using<link xref='secure-connections'>HTTPS</link>, |
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+which makes it much harder for somebody to tamper with. |
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- To use GetTor via XMPP: |
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+ To use GetTor via Jabber/XMPP (Tor Messenger, Jitsi, CoyIM): |
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