tor-tb-manual.git

@@ -1,40 +1,40 @@

 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"

   type="topic"

-  id="onionsites">

+  id="onion-services">

 <info>

-  <desc>Websites hosted in the Tor network</desc>

+  <desc>Services hosted in the Tor network</desc>

   <link type="guide" xref="index" />

 </info>

-<title>Onionsites</title>

+<title>Onion Services</title>

 <p>

-Onionsites (also known as “hidden services”) are websites that are only

-accessible through the Tor network.

+Onion services (also known as “hidden services”) are services (like websites) 

+that are only accessible through the Tor network.

 </p>

 <p>

-Onionsites offer several advantages over ordinary sites on the

+Onion services offer several advantages over ordinary services on the

 non-private web:

 </p>

 <list>

  <item>

   <p>

-  An onionsite’s location and IP address are hidden, making it difficult

+  An onion services’s location and IP address are hidden, making it difficult

   for adversaries to censor it or identify its operators.

   </p>

  </item>

  <item>

   <p>

-  All traffic between Tor users and onionsites is end-to-end encrypted,

+  All traffic between Tor users and onion services is end-to-end encrypted,

   so you do not need to worry about <link

   xref='secure-connections'>connecting over HTTPS</link>.

   </p>

  </item>

  <item>

   <p>

-  The address of an onionsite is automatically generated, so the

+  The address of an onion service is automatically generated, so the

   operators do not need to purchase a domain name; the .onion URL also

   helps Tor ensure that it is connecting to the right location and that

   the connection is not being tampered with.

@@ -43,13 +43,13 @@ non-private web:

 </list>

 <section id="access">

-<title>How to access an onionsite</title>

+<title>How to access an onion service</title>

 <p>

 <media type="image" width="600" src="media/onionsites/onion_url.png" />

 </p>

 <p>

 Just like any other website, you will need to know the address of an

-onionsite in order to connect to it. An onion address is a string of

+onion service in order to connect to it. An onion address is a string of

 sixteen mostly random letters and numbers, followed by “.onion”.

 </p>

 </section>

@@ -57,12 +57,12 @@ sixteen mostly random letters and numbers, followed by “.onion”.

 <section id="troubleshooting">

 <title>Troubleshooting</title>

 <p>

-If you cannot reach the onionsite you require, make sure that you have

+If you cannot reach the onion service you require, make sure that you have

 entered the 16-character onion address correctly: even a small mistake

 will stop Tor Browser from being able to reach the site.

 </p>

 <p>

-If you are still unable to connect to the onionsite, please try again

+If you are still unable to connect to the onion service, please try again

 later. There may be a temporary connection issue, or the site operators

 may have allowed it to go offline without warning.

 </p>