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Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2007-10-21 11:37:50
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 <p>
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-Hundreds of thousands of people around the world use Tor &mdash; <a
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-href="<page whousestor>">journalists and bloggers, human rights workers,
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+Hundreds of thousands of people around the world use Tor for a <a
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+href="<page whousestor>">wide variety of reasons</a>: journalists and
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+bloggers, human rights workers,
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 law enforcement officers, soldiers, corporations, citizens of repressive
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-regimes, and just ordinary citizens</a>. We have a full page devoted
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+regimes, and just ordinary citizens. We have a full page devoted
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 to explaining exactly <a href="<page overview>">what Tor does, why this
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 diversity of users is important, and how Tor works</a>.
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-<p>
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-To quickly start using Tor, we recommend the
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-<a href="<page download>">Vidalia bundle</a>
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-as the easiest to install and get working.
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-</p>
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 <p>
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 There are three pieces of fine print you need to know about.
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 First, Tor does not protect you if you do not use it correctly.
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@@ -106,10 +101,6 @@ href="https://www.eff.org/">Electronic Frontier Foundation</a> for their
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 past support, fiscal sponsorship, and help in hosting some of our web
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 pages, and for their continued mentorship of and counsel to our
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 fledgling nonprofit organization.</li>
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-<li>Sep 2007: If you have received email claiming to be Tor, it wasn't
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-from us. The <a href="<page download>">official Tor bundles</a> can be <a
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-href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/VerifyingSignatures">verified
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-as authentic</a>.</li>
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 <li>Aug 2007: <strong>Please update your Tor software!</strong>  The
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 latest versions (stable: 0.1.2.17; development: 0.2.0.6-alpha)
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 patch a significant security vulnerability.  See the <a
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