Minor language cleanup
Robert Ransom

Robert Ransom commited on 2011-03-28 23:11:51
Zeige 1 geänderte Dateien mit 6 Einfügungen und 5 Löschungen.

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   </div>
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   <div id="maincol"> 
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     <a id="rpms"></a>
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-    <h2><a class="anchor" href="#rpms">Tor packages for rpm-based
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+    <h2><a class="anchor" href="#rpms">Tor packages for RPM-based
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     linux distributions.</a></h2>
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     <br>
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-    <p>Do not use the packages in the native repositories. They are
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+    <p><strong>Do not</strong> use the packages in the native repositories. They are
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     frequently out of date. That means you'll be missing stability and
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     security fixes.
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     </p>
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     <p style="font-size: small">
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     The DNS name <code>deb.torproject.org</code> is actually a set of independent
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-    servers in a DNS round robin configuration.  If you for some reason cannot
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-    access it you might try to use the name of one of its part instead.  Try
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+    servers in a DNS round-robin configuration.  If for some reason you cannot
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+    use it, you might be able to access one of the individual servers
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+    instead.  Try
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     <code>deb-master.torproject.org</code>,
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     <code>mirror.netcologne.de</code> or
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     <code>tor.mirror.youam.de</code>.
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     <p>
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     If you'd like to build from source, please follow the <a
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-    href="<gitblob>doc/tor-rpm-creation.txt">rpm creation instructions</a>.
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+    href="<gitblob>doc/tor-rpm-creation.txt">RPM creation instructions</a>.
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     </p>
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     <hr>
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