Minor language cleanup
Robert Ransom commited on 2011-03-28 23:11:51
Zeige 1 geänderte Dateien mit 6 Einfügungen und 5 Löschungen.
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<a id="rpms"></a> |
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- <h2><a class="anchor" href="#rpms">Tor packages for rpm-based |
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+ <h2><a class="anchor" href="#rpms">Tor packages for RPM-based |
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linux distributions.</a></h2> |
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- <p>Do not use the packages in the native repositories. They are |
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+ <p><strong>Do not</strong> use the packages in the native repositories. They are |
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frequently out of date. That means you'll be missing stability and |
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security fixes. |
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<p style="font-size: small"> |
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The DNS name <code>deb.torproject.org</code> is actually a set of independent |
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- servers in a DNS round robin configuration. If you for some reason cannot |
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- access it you might try to use the name of one of its part instead. Try |
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+ servers in a DNS round-robin configuration. If for some reason you cannot |
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+ use it, you might be able to access one of the individual servers |
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+ instead. Try |
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<code>deb-master.torproject.org</code>, |
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<code>mirror.netcologne.de</code> or |
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<code>tor.mirror.youam.de</code>. |
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<p> |
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If you'd like to build from source, please follow the <a |
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- href="<gitblob>doc/tor-rpm-creation.txt">rpm creation instructions</a>. |
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+ href="<gitblob>doc/tor-rpm-creation.txt">RPM creation instructions</a>. |
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</p> |
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