try to be clearer in the grammar
Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2006-08-01 05:48:09
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 <h3><a class="anchor" href="#ExitSnooping">Should I snoop on the plaintext
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 that exits through my Tor server?</a></h3>
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-<p><strong>No.</strong> You are technically capable of monitoring or
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-logging plaintext that exits your node if you modify the Tor source
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-code or install additional software to enable such snooping.  However,
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+<p><strong>No.</strong> You may be technically capable of modifying
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+the Tor source code or installing additional software to monitor
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+or log plaintext that exits your node. However,
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 Tor server operators in the U.S. can create legal and possibly even
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 criminal liability for themselves under state or federal wiretap laws if
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 they affirmatively monitor, log, or disclose Tor users'
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