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@@ -7,12 +7,10 @@

 <h1>Tor: Finding Tor</h1>

 <hr />

 <p>

-Sometimes it's not possible to directly reach the Tor Project website. 

-We're currently

-working on ways to help users find, download, and install a current version of

-Tor without already having Tor. We know that these suggestions are imperfect,

-but we hope that users will be able to find Tor indirectly if our website is

-blocked. If you're reading this from a search engine's cache, directly from our

+Sometimes it's not possible to directly reach the Tor Project website. Here

+are some ways that you can find and download a current version of

+Tor if our website is blocked in your area. If you're reading this from

+a search engine's cache, directly from our

 website, or by some other method, we hope these suggestions are helpful.

 Additionally, if you have ideas for how to improve these instructions, please

 <a href="<page contact>">contact us</a> and let us know.

@@ -33,38 +31,39 @@ the signature</a> of any downloaded package when possible.

 <h2>With a little help from our friends: Using Mirrors</h2>

 <hr />

 <p>

-A Tor mirror is a site that contains an exact copy of our main site.

-People who cannot reach the Tor website are encouraged to visit our <a

-href="<page mirrors>">mirrors</a> to download copies of our source code as well

-as binary builds for their desired platforms. You may want to use

-a search engine to find mirrors if our mirror page is blocked or seemingly

-unresponsive. It is very important to <a

+A Tor mirror is a website that contains an exact copy of our main site.

+We have <a

+href="<page mirrors>">several dozen mirrors</a> currently, and you

+can find the list by searching for "Tor mirrors" on your favorite

+search engine.

+</p>

+

+<p>

+It is very important to <a

 href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/VerifyingSignatures">verify

-the cryptographic signatures</a> of our software when using any mirror. We

+the cryptographic signatures</a> on the Tor software when using any mirror. We

 cannot ensure the safety or security of any package hosted on remote mirrors

 without a signature. It's probably safe, but a cautious user should check

 signatures when possible.

 </p>

-<h2>Fetching Tor via email: gettor</h2>

+<h2>Fetching Tor via Gmail: gettor</h2>

 <hr />

 <p>

-It is possible to get a copy of Tor by sending an email to a special

-email address: '<tt>gettor AT torproject.org</tt>'. Now anyone who can

-send email can get a copy of Tor. Currently, we only support mail systems

-that we know don't mind large email attachments. Gmail and Yahoo! mail are

-two such mail services that are known to work. A user only needs to send

-us a request with 'help' in the body of the email, and instructions will be

-sent as a reply.

+It is possible to get a copy of Tor by sending an email to a special email

+address: '<tt>gettor AT torproject.org</tt>'. Now anyone who can send

+email can get a copy of Tor. A user only needs to send us a request with

+'help' in the body of the email, and instructions will be sent as a reply.

 </p>

 <p>

 To avoid spamming people accidentally, we only answer emails that are sent

 from email services that support <a href="http://www.dkim.org/">DKIM</a>,

-which is an email feature that lets us verify that the sender in the

-"From" line is actually the one who sent the mail. If we get an email from

-a service that doesn't use DKIM, we'll send a short note and then ignore

-the email address for the next day or so.

+which is an email feature that lets us verify that the address in the

+"From" line is actually the one who sent the mail. Gmail and Yahoo! mail

+are two such mail services that are known to work. If we get an email

+from a service that doesn't use DKIM, we'll send a short explanation

+and then ignore the email address for the next day or so.

 </p>

 <h2>Fetching Tor via IRC: gettor</h2>