cleanups from chris and seth
Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2005-05-28 07:57:34
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@@ -58,8 +58,8 @@ to the user. The Tor project, affiliated with the
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 running a UI contest to develop a vision of how Tor can
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 work in a user's everyday anonymous browsing experience. Some of the
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 challenges include how to make alerts and error conditions visible on
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-screen; how to let the user configure Tor to use certain paths or avoid
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-certain paths; how to learn about the current state of a Tor connection,
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+screen; how to let the user configure Tor to use or avoid certain routes
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+or nodes; how to learn about the current state of a Tor connection,
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 including which servers it uses; and how to find out whether (and which)
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 applications are using Tor safely.
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 </p>
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@@ -67,7 +67,9 @@ applications are using Tor safely.
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 <h3>Goals</h3>
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-<p>Contestants will produce a work of Free software that will
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+<p>Contestants will produce a work of <a
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+href="http://www.fsf.org/licensing/essays/free-sw.html">Free software</a>
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+that will
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 provide a user interface to the Tor system by way of the <a
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 href="http://tor.eff.org/cvs/tor/doc/control-spec.txt">Tor Controller
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 Protocol</a>.</p>
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@@ -103,7 +105,8 @@ map from the movie <i>Sneakers</i>.</li>
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 <li>Configure other running applications to use Tor (for example,
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 by modifying or working through the network stack, and/or by altering
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 application configurations).</li>
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-<li>Provide an elegant installer for both Tor and the application.</li>
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+<li>Provide an elegant installer for Tor, the GUI application, and
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+other supporting applications.</li>
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 <li>Provide meaningful defaults for a good Tor experience.</li>
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 <li>Implement Privoxy-like functionality -- that is, not just paying
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 attention to transport anonymity on the level of Tor, but also paying
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