cleanups on r18747
Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2009-03-03 07:42:18
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 <p>Since 2001, the Tor Project has been developing free and
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  open-source software that helps provide anonymity for Internet users. It works
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 by allowing users
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-to travel the web on a circuitous route over 1500 servers positioned
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+to travel the web on a circuitous route over more than 1000 servers positioned
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 around the world. When you use Tor, your route on the Internet is indirect,
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 so snoops have a difficult time following your path and seizing vital
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 information. Tor also has special functionality, called hidden services,
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 <li>Journalists who need to protect their sources</li>
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 <li>Human rights workers</li>
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 <li>Dissidents in politically rigid countries</li>
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-<li>Corporations who wish to protect their employees web traffic</li>
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+<li>Corporations who wish to protect their employees' web traffic</li>
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 <li>Whistle blowers who fear retribution</li>
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-<li>Governments wishing to protect their agents and employees traffic</li>
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+<li>Governments wishing to protect their agents' and employees' traffic</li>
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 <li>Law enforcement officers on Internet sting operations</li>
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 <li>People wanting to post socially sensitive information in chat
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 rooms, like rape or abuse survivors and those with stigmatized illnesses.</li>
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