Edit for grammar / brevity.
Martin Peck commited on 2009-03-25 13:39:00
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@@ -27,8 +27,7 @@ important before using this software on your system.</p> |
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<p>The bundle packages are preferred since they include Vidalia and other Tor |
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software that improves the user experience. If a portable Tor VM instance is |
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required then the self extracting archive can be used to install Tor VM alone |
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-onto a portable storage device and run wheverever administrator rights are |
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-available to you.</p> |
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+onto a portable storage device.</p> |
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<ul> |
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<li><a href="dist/TorVM-0.0.1-NetInstaller.exe">Tor VM Network Installer</a> |
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<p><img src="img/switch-user.png" alt="Switch to restricted user to play Flash content" /></p> |
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<p>First be sure that transparent proxy of Internet traffic through Tor is |
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-working correctly. Tor VM ensures that all your traffic is anonymized |
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-regardless of whether TorButton and Firefox are used or not.</p> |
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+working correctly. Tor VM ensures that all your traffic is relayed |
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+by default without any application configuration.</p> |
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<p><img src="img/flash01.png" alt="Verify Tor usage at check.torproject.org" /></p> |
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