tor-webwml.git

@@ -17,9 +17,10 @@ link some important financial or personal information to you!</p>

 <ul>

 <li>Your Internet service provider</li>

 <li>Your favorite website or online store</li>

+<li>Your favorite coffee shop or cafe with free wifi</li>

 </ul>

-<p>These activities are commonly called traffic analysis and corporations,

+<p>These snooping activities are commonly called traffic analysis. Corporations,

 marketing organizations, governments, and other parties are becoming

 increasingly sophisticated at it.</p>

@@ -29,6 +30,7 @@ increasingly sophisticated at it.</p>

 journals</li>

 <li>Thieves, spammers, and phishers to launch progressively sophisticated and

 personalized attacks</li>

+<li>Corporations can collect and aggregate online browsing and chatting behavior for better ad-targeting and profiling.</li>

 </ul>

 <p>For some people, this electronic spying is a nuisance that can affect their

@@ -37,11 +39,11 @@ pocketbook; for others, it jeopardizes their personal security.</p>

 <p>Since 2001, the Tor Project has been developing free and

  open-source software that helps provide anonymity for Internet users. It works

 by allowing users

-to travel the web on a circuitous route on a set of servers positioned

+to travel the web on a circuitous route over 1500 servers positioned

 around the world. When you use Tor, your route on the Internet is indirect,

 so snoops have a difficult time following your path and seizing vital

 information. Tor also has special functionality, called hidden services,

-that allows users to run websites without revealing their location.</p>

+that allows you to run websites without revealing their location.</p>

 <p>Tor is compatible with different operating systems, such as Microsoft

 Windows, Apple Mac, and various versions of Linux. Tor works with most

@@ -53,7 +55,10 @@ online:</p>

 <li>Journalists who need to protect their sources</li>

 <li>Human rights workers</li>

 <li>Dissidents in politically rigid countries</li>

+<li>Corporations who wish to protect their employees web traffic</li>

+

 <li>Whistle blowers who fear retribution</li>

+<li>Governments wishing to protect their agents and employees traffic</li>

 <li>Law enforcement officers on Internet sting operations</li>

 <li>People wanting to post socially sensitive information in chat

 rooms, like rape or abuse survivors and those with stigmatized illnesses.</li>