a bit more polish
Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2007-10-22 09:30:35
Zeige 1 geänderte Dateien mit 8 Einfügungen und 4 Löschungen.

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 <h2>Download current Tor version</h2>
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 <p>
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 Tor is distributed as <a href="http://www.fsf.org/">Free Software</a>
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 under the <a href="<svnsandbox>LICENSE">3-clause BSD license</a>.
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 To keep informed of security advisories and new stable releases, subscribe
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 to the <a href="http://archives.seul.org/or/announce/">or-announce
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-mailing list</a> (you will need to confirm via email). You can also
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+mailing list</a> (you will be asked to confirm via email). You can also
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 <a href="http://rss.gmane.org/gmane.network.onion-routing.announce">watch
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-the RSS feed</a>.
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+the list's RSS feed</a>.
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 <form action="http://freehaven.net/cgi-bin/majordomo.cgi">
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 <input type="hidden" name="subscribe" value="1">
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 <input type="hidden" name="host" value="freehaven.net">
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 <input name="email" size="15">
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 <h2>Development releases and source code</h2>
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 These development snapshots are released so you can help us test new
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-features and bugfixes. Even though these have a higher version number
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+features and bugfixes. Even though they have a higher version number
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 than the stable versions listed above, there is a much higher chance
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 of serious reliability and security bugs in these downloads. Please be
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 prepared to report bugs.
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