Minors changes on the text. Replaced autoresponder by robot. Fixed length of links.
ileiva

ileiva commited on 2015-02-08 20:45:00
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 # Revision: $Revision$
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-#include "head.wmi" TITLE="Tor Project: GetTor autoresponder" CHARSET="UTF-8"
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+#include "head.wmi" TITLE="Tor Project: GetTor robot" CHARSET="UTF-8"
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 <div id="content" class="clearfix">
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 	<div id="breadcrumbs">
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     <a href="<page index>">Home &raquo; </a>
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   </div>
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 	<div id="maincol"> 
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-    <h1>GetTor autoresponder</h1>
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-<p>GetTor is a program that presents alternative methods to download Tor
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-Browser, specially when access to Tor Project's official website and mirrors
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-is blocked. For now, the only available method is SMTP (email).</p>
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+    <h1>GetTor robot</h1>
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+<p>GetTor is a service that provides alternative methods to download Tor
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+Browser, specially for situations where access to Tor Project's official
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+website and mirrors is blocked. For now, the only available method is
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+SMTP (email).</p>
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 <h2>Download Tor Browser via email</h2>
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 <p>Users can communicate with GetTor robot by sending messages via email. 
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-Currently, the best known GetTor email address is gettor @ torproject.org. 
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-This should be the most current stable GetTor robot as it is operated by 
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-Tor Project.</p>
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+Currently, the best known email address to do this is gettor@torproject.org.
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+This should be the most current and stable GetTor robot as it is operated
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+by Tor Project itself.</p>
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-<p>To ask for Tor Browser a user should send an email to GetTor robot with 
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-one of the following options in the message body:</p>
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+<p>To ask for Tor Browser, a user should send an email to GetTor robot with 
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+one of the following options in the body of the message:</p>
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 <ul>
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    <li><strong>windows</strong>: If the user needs Tor Browser for Windows.
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    </li>
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 </ul>
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-<p>Options are case insensitive. If a user select two or more options, only 
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+<p>Options are case insensitive. If a user selects two or more options, only 
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 the first one will be considered. After the user sends a valid option, GetTor 
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 robot will reply with links to download Tor Browser from popular cloud 
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 services. For now, the only cloud service supported is Dropbox. A sample 
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-reply from GetTor robot should look like this:</p>
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+reply from GetTor robot should look similar to this:</p>
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 <pre>
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    Thank you for your request for windows-en.
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    Dropbox
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-   Package (32/64-bit): https://www.dropbox.com/s/0p4oew8w2u7vzv2/torbrowser-install-4.0.1_en-US.exe?dl=1
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-   ASC signature (32/64-bit): https://www.dropbox.com/s/y68hhrk378lygn4/torbrowser-install-4.0.1_en-US.exe.asc?dl=1
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-   Package SHA256 checksum (32/64-bit): e41078c34785e6834657d008d0c2b0b671b793b5cbc67ebc60e8d55735504a10
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+   Package (32/64-bit):
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+   https://www.dropbox.com/s/0p4oew8w/torbrowser-install-4.0.1_en-US.exe?dl=1
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+
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+   ASC signature (32/64-bit):
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+   https://www.dropbox.com/s/y68h/torbrowser-install-4.0.1_en-US.exe.asc?dl=1
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+   Package SHA256 checksum (32/64-bit):
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+   e41078c34785e6834657d008d0c2b0b671b793b5cbc67ebc60e8d55735504a10
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    Fingerprint: 8738 A680 B84B 3031 A630 F2DB 416F 0610 63FE E659
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 reach the Tor network after the install process should consider using
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 <a href="https://bridges.torproject.org">bridges</a> or
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 <a href="https://www.torproject.org/docs/pluggable-transports.html.en">
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-pluggable transports</a>. This guide will be provided by the GetTor
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+pluggable transports</a>. These guides will be provided by the GetTor
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 robot in the future.
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 </p>
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