tor-webwml.git

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ Tor is a decentralized network of computers on the Internet that increases

 privacy in Web browsing, instant messaging, and other applications. We

 estimate there are some 50,000 Tor users currently, routing their traffic

 through about 250 volunteer Tor servers on five continents. However, Tor's

-current user interface approach --- running as a daemon in the background

+current user interface approach --- running as a service in the background

 --- does a poor job of communicating network status and security levels

 to the user.

 </p>

@@ -229,7 +229,12 @@ awarded for additional systems.</li>

 <p>Submissions for phase one (sketches) should come as:</p>

 <ul>

-<li>TBD (please help me decide what this should say)<li>

+<li>Images in an html page. The images must be able to be viewed on an

+ordinary browser (e.g. Firefox). You can submit proprietary formats too,

+but if you do then you need to also export them to something we can

+all read.</li>

+<li>A design document (txt, html, pdf, or ps) as described in the

+<a href="#Categories">Contest Categories</a> section above.</li>

 </ul>

 <p>Submissions for phase two (code) should come as:</p>

@@ -332,9 +337,9 @@ that the network has an error?</li>

 <h3><a class="anchor" href="#Technical">Technical Notes</a></h3>

 <p>Shortly before phase two begins, the Tor developers will release

-a canonical code version. This is the version that will be used for

+a canonical version of Tor. This is the version that will be used for

 judging the contest; please ensure that you use this version. Bugfixes

-to this version will be announced to the contest web site.</p>

+to this version of Tor will be announced to the contest web site.</p>

 <p>The Tor developers will also release test rigs (libraries) in both Java

 and Python that demonstrate Tor's controller protocol. Code submissions