tor-webwml.git

@@ -81,11 +81,11 @@ Protocol</a>.</p>

 <p>We are looking for a vision of how Tor can work in a user's everyday

 anonymous browsing experience.</p>

-<p>Successful entries will:</p>

+<p>Entries will:</p>

 <ul>

 <li>Allow the user to fully configure Tor without directly searching

 for and opening text files.</li>

-<li>Learn about the current state of their Tor connection (including

+<li>Let users learn about the current state of their Tor connection (including

 which servers they are connected to, and how many of them), and find

 out whether any of their applications are using it.</li>

 <li>Make alerts and error conditions visible on screen.</li>

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ out whether any of their applications are using it.</li>

 not-unusually-configured consumer-level machine.</li>

 </ul>

-<p>In addition, it may:</p>

+<p>In addition, they may:</p>

 <ul>

 <li>Provide detailed information about which

 applications, ports, or packets are (or are not!) passing through Tor,

@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ and design documentation to aid would-be implementers.</li>

 <p><b>Code:</b> the goal of this stage is to produce a working

 implementation. You may use any of the sketches, graphics, or ideas from

-the first stage.</p>

+the first stage, with appropriate credit to their authors.</p>

 <p>

 An acceptable entry will be a package of free software that builds and

@@ -244,6 +244,7 @@ and security (to be announced).</p>

 <li>Stage 1 deadline (sketches): October 31.</li>

 <li>Stage 1 judging: November 31.</li>

 <li>Stage 2 deadline (code): January 31, 2006.</li>

+</ul>

 <p>Winners will be announced at the SOUPS 2006 conference.</p>

@@ -274,9 +275,6 @@ user tell that the network is now live?</li>

 that the network has an error?</li>

 </ul>

-<hr />

-<h3>Submissions</h3>

-

 <hr />

 <h3>Technical Notes</h3>