Updated introductory paragraph on jeff's version of the index
Andrew Lewman commited on 2007-10-23 02:52:56
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-Tor keeps you anonymous on the Internet, protecting |
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-you from a variety of threats by bouncing your communications |
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-around a worldwide set of servers to mask where they came from. |
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-There are many reasons to use Tor. For example: |
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+Tor helps keep you anonymous on the Internet. It transfers your |
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+communications around a worldwide set of servers. This masks your |
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+destination and source locations. This provides some protections from a |
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+variety of attacks from a variety of people and organizations on the |
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+Internet. There are many reasons to use Tor. For example: |
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<li>You live in a country that restricts access to certain sites or services. |
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Tor hides where you go on the Internet from your ISP, |
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