tor-webwml.git

@@ -58,10 +58,9 @@ service</a> and put interesting content on it.

 services. Get them to tell <i>their</i> friends.</li>

 <li>Does somebody want to help maintain this website, or help with

 documentation, or help with managing our TODO and handling bug reports?</li>

-<li>It would be nice to translate the web page

+<li>Please help translate the web page and documentation

 into other languages. See the <a href="translation.html">translation guidelines</a> 

-if you want to help out.</li>

-<li>Please translate the documentation into other languages. (Examples: 

+if you want to help out. (Examples:

 <a href="http://membres.lycos.fr/geolemalin/anonymat_garantit.htm">French</a>

 and <a href="http://tor.freesuperhost.com/">Persian</a>)</li>

 <li>Please fix up <a

@@ -44,28 +44,27 @@ width="110" height="79" alt="Tor logo" /></a>

 <hr />

 <p>

-If you want to help out translate this website into other languages,

-some basic guidelines has been established in order to do this

+If you want to help translate the Tor website and documentation into

+other languages, these are some basic guidelines to help you do this

 as efficiently as possible.<br />

-At this time, German, Danish and Swedish translations is under way.

+At this time, German, Danish and Swedish translations are under way.

 </p>

 <p>

-Before you start translating, note that we're interested in getting

-the complete website translated. Not just one or two individual pages.

+Note that we're interested in getting the complete website translated

+for each language, but even a few pages will still be a helpful.

 </p>

 <ol>

 <li>File names should be changed from index.html to index.xx.html, where xx

-is the <a href="http://www.w3.org/WAI/ER/IG/ert/iso639.htm">ISO 639</a>, 

-two letter, country code.</li>

+is your <a href="http://www.w3.org/WAI/ER/IG/ert/iso639.htm">ISO 639</a>

+two letter country code.</li>

 <li>The first line in the translated file should be<br />

 &lt;!-- revision 0.00 --&gt;<br />

 where 0.00 is the revision number of the original page translated, to

 easily spot when a page gets out of date. The revision number is found at

-the bottom on each page. Be sure to checkout the CVS to get the latest 

-version of the website, you can find more information on how to do this 

-<a href="developers.html">here</a>.</li>

+the bottom on each page. Be sure to <a href="developers.html">checkout

+the CVS</a> to get the latest version of the website.</li>

 <li>The second line in the translated file should be the email address of

 the translator:<br />

@@ -73,16 +72,16 @@ the translator:<br />

 so we can get ahold of you if the pages needs to be corrected or updated.</li>

 <li>Translated pages should link to the other translated pages,

-except the logo which should always link to http://tor.eff.org.</li>

+except the logo which should always link to http://tor.eff.org/</li>

 <li>Use valid <a href="http://roselli.org/adrian/articles/character_charts.asp">character entities</a>.

-Even though most browsers displays the characters correct these days, we want 

-to be on the safe side. We don't want to get loads of bug reports saying that

-they can't read the text.</li>

+Even though most browsers display the characters correctly these days, we want

+to be on the safe side, so we don't get bug reports from people who can't

+read the text.</li>

-<li>Keep your translation valid XHTML to minimize the work needed before the page

-is commited to the CVS. You can test your code at <a href="http://validator.w3.org/">

-validator.w3.org</a>.</li>

+<li>Keep your translation valid XHTML to minimize the work needed

+before the page is committed to CVS. You can test your code at <a

+href="http://validator.w3.org/">validator.w3.org</a>.</li>

 </ol>

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