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 <h1>The Tor Project is looking for a Project Coordinator!</h1>

 <p>

-A project coordinator is the person who coordinates and helps track

-deliverables, progress, and metrics on past and current

-performance of projects.

+A project coordinator is the person who brings order to chaos. You will coordinate and help track

+deliverables, progress, and metrics of current projects. You will also

+help plan future projects through proposals.

 </p>

 <p>Your impact will involve:</p>

@@ -44,14 +44,14 @@ with deliverables, tickets, and monthly summaries of progress.</li>

 <p>In general, you should:</p>

 <ul>

-<li>Be comfortable and experienced justifying and documenting technical

-decisions for a public, world-wide technical audience.</li>

-<li>Be comfortable working remotely.</li>

 <li>Be comfortable and experienced with interacting with users and other

 developers online.</li>

+<li>Be comfortable working remotely.</li>

 <li>Be comfortable with transparency: as a non-profit, everything we do is in

 public, including your name (or at least your business name) and pay

 rate.</li>

+<li>Be comfortable and experienced justifying and documenting technical

+decisions for a public, world-wide technical audience.</li>

 </ul>

 <p>An ideal candidate would also:</p>