tor-webwml.git

@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@ websites let users publish material without worrying about censorship.

 Of course, Tor can't solve all privacy problems itself. Tor focuses on

 protecting the <em>transport</em>. You need to use other protocol-specific

 software, such as Privoxy for web browsing, to clean identifying

-information such as browser type and characteristics, and you need

-to use other common sense such as not providing your name or other

+information like browser type and characteristics, and you need

+to use other common sense: don't provide your name or other

 revealing information in web forms. Also, like all anonymizing networks

 that are fast enough for web browsing, Tor does not provide protection

 against end-to-end timing attacks: if your attacker can watch the traffic

@@ -114,12 +114,16 @@ of the same circuit.

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 <p>

-Providing a usable anonymizing network on the Internet today is hard,

-both in terms of providing usable software that meets users' needs,

-and also in terms of solving the research challenges. But we're making

-progress at finding a good balance to provide both usability and security.

-Our goal is to supplement laws by giving people the power to make their

-own decisions about their privacy.

+Anonymity is threatened as never before by trends in law, policy, and

+technology that are undermining our ability to speak and read freely

+online without revealing who we are. Rather than trusting to laws to

+maintain our rights, Tor aims to give people the power to make their own

+decisions about their privacy. Providing a usable anonymizing network on

+the Internet today is an ongoing challenge, both in terms of providing

+usable software that meets users' needs, and also in terms of keeping the

+network up and able to handle all the users; but we're making progress

+at finding a good balance to provide both usability and security. Please

+do what you can to help out.

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