overhaul the bridges page. note a todo item for jake/matt.
Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2008-06-14 01:42:04
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 #include "head.wmi" TITLE="Tor: Bridges" CHARSET="UTF-8"
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-# Please don't translate this page quite yet. It's still undergoing
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-# revision. -RD
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 <div class="main-column">
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 <a id="BridgeIntroduction"></a>
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 <p>
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-The addition of bridges to Tor is a step forward in the blocking resistance 
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-race. It is perfectly possible that you do not require a bridge to use Tor.
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-Please try to use Tor first and if you have issues using the Tor network, 
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-it is possible that you're in need of a bridge to circumvent filtering. 
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-It is also possible that Tor is non-functional for other reasons.
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-Even for experts it can be difficult to understand why the Tor network is hard 
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-to reach.
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-It's important to read 
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-<a href="https://wiki.torproject.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#ItDoesntWork">
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-the FAQ about problems with running Tor properly</a> when you have issues. 
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-If you feel that the issue is clearly blocking, or you'd simply like to try 
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-because you're unsure or feeling adventurous, please read on. Ensure that 
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-you're using the <a href="<page download>">latest 0.2.0.x bundle for 
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-your platform</a>.
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+The addition of bridges to Tor is a step forward in the blocking
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+resistance race. It is perfectly possible that even if your ISP filters
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+the Internet, you do not require a bridge to use Tor. Many filtering
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+programs look for unencrypted Tor directory requests to recognize that
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+you're using Tor, but Tor version 0.2.0.23-rc and later use encrypted
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+directory queries by default. This change means that most filtering
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+programs are now unable to recognize Tor connections. So you should try
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+to use Tor without bridges first, since it might work.
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 </p>
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 <p>
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-Many filtering programs look for unencrypted Tor directory requests to decide 
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-if you're using Tor. As of Tor version 0.2.0.23-rc, those filtering programs 
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-probably don't work on Tor. We've changed how Tor learns about the network.
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-These newer versions of Tor now use encrypted directory queries by default.
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-These changes are only positive and have no new learning curves associated 
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-with them. Tor simply works better now.
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+Note that it's also possible that Tor is non-functional for other
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+reasons. The latest version of <a href="<page torbrowser/index>">The
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+Tor Browser Bundle</a> on Windows tries to give you better hints about
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+why Tor is having problems connecting. You should also read <a
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+href="https://wiki.torproject.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#ItDoesntWork">the
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+FAQ about problems with running Tor properly</a> when you have issues.
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+If you feel that the issue is clearly blocking, or you'd simply like to try
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+because you're unsure or feeling adventurous, please read on. Ensure
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+that you're using the <a href="<page download>#Dev">latest 0.2.0.x or
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+0.2.1.x bundle for your platform</a>.
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 </p>
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 <p>
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 To use a bridge, you'll need to locate one. Furthermore, you'll need to
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 configure Tor with whatever bridge address you intend to use. You'll do this
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 with Vidalia, the Tor controller.
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-In the event of your internet connection requiring the use of a proxy, you'll 
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-probably need to configure Vidalia to do so first. If you don't think you need 
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+If your Internet connection requires the use of a proxy, you'll probably
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+need to configure Vidalia to do so first. If you don't think you need
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 to configure a proxy for your internet connection, you probably don't.
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 Give it a try and if you have issues, ask us for help.
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 </p>
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 <p>
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 At the moment, you can get a bridge by visiting
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 <a href="https://bridges.torproject.org/">https://bridges.torproject.org/</a>
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-with your web browser.
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+with your web browser. If this page is filtered for you, and you
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+don't have any other proxies or ways to reach it, there are <a
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+href="#FindingMore">other ways to find bridges</a> too.
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 </p>
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 <a id="Understanding"></a>
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 <hr />
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 <p>
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-As an example exercise, you'll get a bridge entry that looks like the 
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-following:<br>
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+As an example, you'll get a bridge entry that looks like the
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+following:<br />
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 <pre>
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 bridge 141.201.27.48:443 4352e58420e68f5e40bf7c74faddccd9d1349413
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 </pre>
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 </p>
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 <p>
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-Understanding the above example isn't strictly required but may prove useful. 
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-You can skip this section if you'd like.
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-The first element is the name: <tt>'bridge'</tt>.<br>
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-The second element is the IP address: <tt>'141.201.27.48'</tt><br>
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-The third element is the port: <tt>'443'</tt><br>
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-The fourth element is the fingerprint: 
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-<tt>'4352e58420e68f5e40bf7c74faddccd9d1349413'</tt><br>
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+Understanding the components of a bridge line isn't strictly required
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+but may prove useful. You can skip this section if you'd like.<br />
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+The first element is the IP address: <tt>'141.201.27.48'</tt><br />
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+The second element is the port: <tt>'443'</tt><br />
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+The third element, the fingerprint, is optional:
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+<tt>'4352e58420e68f5e40bf7c74faddccd9d1349413'</tt><br />
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 </p>
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 <a id="UsingBridges"></a>
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-<h3><a class="anchor" href="#UsingBridges">Using bridges with Tor and Vidalia</a></h3>
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+<h2><a class="anchor" href="#UsingBridges">Using bridges with Tor and
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+Vidalia</a></h2>
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 <hr />
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 <p>
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 To use the example bridge address above, go to Vidalia's Network settings
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-page, and click "My ISP blocks connections to the Tor network". You'll want 
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-to add as many bridge addresses as you know about. Regardless of how many 
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-bridges you intend to use, the process for use is the same. Add each bridge 
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-address one at a time in the Vidalia Network settings page. One bridge should 
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-be enough for general use. However, in the event of using a single bridge, 
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-one bridge failing will cause loss of access to the Tor network. Adding 
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-additional bridges will increase reliability. This is pictured below:<br><br>
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+page, and click "My ISP blocks connections to the Tor network".  Add each
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+bridge address one at a time in the Vidalia Network settings page,
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+by pasting it into the "Add a Bridge" window and then clicking the "+"
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+sign. Adding a bridge is pictured below:
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+</p>
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+
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+# XXX Todo: This image would work better if it had a bridge line in the
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+# 'add a bridge' window, and had a cursor hovering over the + sign. -RD
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+<br /><br />
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 <img src="$(IMGROOT)/vidalia-bridges.png" alt="Vidalia's Network settings page" />
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+</p>
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+You'll want to add as many bridge addresses as you know about, since
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+additional bridges will increase reliability. One bridge should be enough
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+to reach the Tor network, but if you only have one bridge and it goes
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+down, you will be cut off from the Tor network.
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 <a id="FindingMore"></a>
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-<h4><a class="anchor" href="#FindingMore">Finding more bridges for Tor</a></h4>
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+<h2><a class="anchor" href="#FindingMore">Finding more bridges for Tor</a></h2>
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 Another way to find public bridge addresses is to send mail to
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-bridges@torproject.org with the line "get bridges" by itself in the body of the 
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-mail. However, so we can make it harder for an attacker to learn lots of bridge 
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-addresses, you must send this request from a gmail or yahoo account. Almost instantly, you'll receive a reply that looks like the following:
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+bridges@torproject.org with the line "get bridges" by itself in the
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+body of the mail. You'll need to send this request from a gmail or yahoo
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+account, though &mdash; otherwise we make it too easy for an attacker
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+to make a lot of email addresses and learn about all the bridges.
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+Almost instantly, you'll receive a reply that starts with the following:
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  bridge 87.237.118.139:444 c18dde4804e8fcb48464341ca1375eb130453a39
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  bridge 60.63.97.221:443 ab5c849ed5896d53052e43966ee9aba2ff92fb82
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-Bridge relays (or "bridges" for short) are Tor relays that aren't listed
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-even if your ISP is filtering connections to all the known Tor relays,
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-they probably won't be able to block all the bridges.
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-To use the above lines, go to Vidalia's Network settings page, and click
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 </pre>
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-Once you've recived the email with bridge information, you can continue the Vidalia configuration steps outlined above.
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