Bug 20465: Call it 'Tor Browser', not 'The Tor Browser'
Arthur Edelstein

Arthur Edelstein commited on 2016-10-25 22:53:29
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           <dd>Researcher at University College London who works
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           on security, performance, and usability of Tor. Original creator
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           of the <a href="<page projects/torbrowser>">Tor Browser
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-          Bundle</a> (now just called the Tor Browser). You can find
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+          Bundle</a> (now just called Tor Browser). You can find
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           out more about his work on his
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           <a href="http://www.cs.ucl.ac.uk/staff/s.murdoch/">professional
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           website</a>.</dd>
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     <p>No, it doesn't. You need to use a separate program that understands
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     your application and protocol and knows how to clean or "scrub" the data
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-    it sends. The Tor Browser tries to keep application-level data,
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-    like the user-agent string, uniform for all users. The Tor Browser can't
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+    it sends. Tor Browser tries to keep application-level data,
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+    like the user-agent string, uniform for all users. Tor Browser can't
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     do anything about text that you type into forms, though. <a
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     href="<page download/download-easy>#warning">Be
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     careful and be smart.</a>
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 Preferences-> Behavior Tab -> Set "Run executable text files when they are
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 opened" to "Ask every time", then OK.
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 </p>
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-<p>You can also start the Tor Browser from the command line by running </p>
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+<p>You can also start Tor Browser from the command line by running </p>
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 <pre>./start-tor-browser</pre>
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 <p>
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 from inside the Tor Browser directory.
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 Firefox extensions?</a></h3>
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 <p>
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-The Tor Browser is free software, so there is nothing preventing you from
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+Tor Browser is free software, so there is nothing preventing you from
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 modifying it any way you like. However, we do not recommend installing any
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 additional Firefox add-ons with Tor Browser. Add-ons can break
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 your anonymity in a number of ways, including browser fingerprinting and
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 </p>
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 <p>
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 Some people have suggested we include ad-blocking software or
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-anti-tracking software with the Tor Browser. Right now, we do not
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+anti-tracking software with Tor Browser. Right now, we do not
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 think that's such a good idea. Tor Browser aims to provide
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 sufficient privacy that additional add-ons to stop ads and trackers are
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 not necessary. Using add-ons like these may cause some sites to break, which
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 Our efforts to work with the Chrome team to <a
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 href="https://blog.torproject.org/blog/google-chrome-incognito-mode-tor-and-fingerprinting">add
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 missing APIs</a> were unsuccessful, unfortunately. Currently, it is impossible
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-to use other browsers and get the same level of protections as when using the
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+to use other browsers and get the same level of protections as when using
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 Tor Browser.
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 </p>
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     a web browser that is preconfigured to
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     help you control the risks to your privacy and anonymity while browsing
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     the Internet. Not only are the above technologies disabled to prevent
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-    identity leaks, the Tor Browser also includes browser extensions like
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+    identity leaks, Tor Browser also includes browser extensions like
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     NoScript and Torbutton, as well as patches to the Firefox source
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-    code. The full design of the Tor Browser can be read <a
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+    code. The full design of Tor Browser can be read <a
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     href="https://www.torproject.org/projects/torbrowser/design/">here</a>.
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     In designing a safe, secure solution for browsing the web with Tor,
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     we've discovered that configuring <a href="#TBBOtherBrowser">other
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     are done.
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     </h2>
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-    <p>Even though the Tor Browser comes with a regular Tor, it will only run
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-    as long as you keep the Tor Browser open. The following instructions will
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+    <p>Even though Tor Browser comes with a regular Tor, it will only run
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+    as long as you keep Tor Browser open. The following instructions will
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     set up Tor without graphical interface or a browser. Many people prefer
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     this over TBB when they host hidden services or relay traffic for other Tor
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     users.  <hr>
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     you will need to tell Windows the full path to the GnuPG program. If
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     you installed GnuPG with the default values, the path should be
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     something like this: <i>C:\Program Files\Gnu\GnuPg\gpg.exe</i>.</p>
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-    <p>The Tor Browser team signs the Tor Browsers. Import its key
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+    <p>The Tor Browser team signs Tor Browser releases. Import its key
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     (0x4E2C6E8793298290) by starting <i>cmd.exe</i> and typing:</p>
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     <pre>"C:\Program Files\Gnu\GnuPg\gpg.exe" --keyserver pool.sks-keyservers.net --recv-keys 0x4E2C6E8793298290</pre>
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     <p>After importing the key, you can verify that the fingerprint
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     </p>
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     <p>The next step is to use GnuPG to import the key that signed
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-    your package. The Tor Browser team signs the Tor Browsers. Import its
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+    your package. The Tor Browser team signs Tor Browser releases. Import its
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     key (0x4E2C6E8793298290) by starting the terminal (under "Applications"
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     in Mac OS X) and typing:</p>
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        property</a> of Tor Browser 3.0 and later. Anyone can build
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        Tor Browser on their own machine and produce a binary that is
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        bit-for-bit identical to the binary we offer on the download page.
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-       Fortunately, it is not necessary for everyone to build the Tor Browser
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+       Fortunately, it is not necessary for everyone to build Tor Browser
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        locally to get this security. Verifying and comparing the signed list
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        of <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cryptographic_hash">hashes</a>
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        will confirm that multiple people have built Tor Browsers
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             anonymity and privacy technologies, supporting their
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             unrestricted availability and use, and furthering their
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             scientific and popular understanding. The main product of
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-            the Tor Project is the Tor Browser, which enables people
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+            the Tor Project is Tor Browser, which enables people
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             to browse the internet anonymously.  The Tor Project is a
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             501(c)3 tax-exempt non-profit organization based in Boston,
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             Massachusetts. It was founded in 2006.</p>
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 <ol>
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-<li><b>Use the Tor Browser</b>
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+<li><b>Use Tor Browser</b>
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 <p>Tor does not protect all of your computer's Internet traffic when you
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 run it. Tor only protects your applications that are properly configured
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 to send their Internet traffic through Tor. To avoid problems with
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 Tor configuration, we strongly recommend you use the <a href="<page
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 projects/torbrowser>">Tor Browser</a>. It is pre-configured to
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 protect your privacy and anonymity on the web as long as you're browsing
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-with the Tor Browser itself. Almost any other web browser configuration
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+with Tor Browser itself. Almost any other web browser configuration
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 is likely to be unsafe to use with Tor.</p>
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 </li>
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 <li><b>Don't torrent over Tor</b>
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 </p>
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 </li>
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 <li><b>Don't enable or install browser plugins</b>
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-<p>The Tor Browser will block browser plugins such as Flash, RealPlayer,
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+<p>Tor Browser will block browser plugins such as Flash, RealPlayer,
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 Quicktime, and others: they can be manipulated into revealing your IP
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 address.  Similarly, we do not recommend installing additional addons or
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-plugins into the Tor Browser, as these may bypass Tor or otherwise harm
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+plugins into Tor Browser, as these may bypass Tor or otherwise harm
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 your anonymity and privacy.</p>
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 </li>
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 href="<page about/overview>#thesolution">to
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 and within the Tor network</a>, but the encryption of your traffic to
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 the final destination website depends upon on that website. To help
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-ensure private encryption to websites, the Tor Browser includes
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+ensure private encryption to websites, Tor Browser includes
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 <a href="https://www.eff.org/https-everywhere">HTTPS Everywhere</a>
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 to force the use of HTTPS encryption with major websites that
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 support it. However, you should still watch the browser URL bar to
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 </li>
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 <li><b>Don't open documents downloaded through Tor while online</b>
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-<p>The Tor Browser will warn you before automatically opening
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+<p>Tor Browser will warn you before automatically opening
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 documents that are handled by external applications. <b>DO NOT
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 IGNORE THIS WARNING</b>.  You should be very careful when downloading
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 documents via Tor (especially DOC and PDF files, unless you use the PDF
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 you are used to.</p>
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 <ol>
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-<li><b>Use the Tor Browser</b>
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+<li><b>Use Tor Browser</b>
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 <p>
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 send their Internet traffic through Tor. To avoid problems with Tor
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 configuration, we strongly recommend you use the
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 <a href="<page projects/torbrowser>">Tor Browser</a>. It is pre-configured to protect
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-your privacy and anonymity on the web as long as you're browsing with the Tor
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+your privacy and anonymity on the web as long as you're browsing with Tor
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 Browser itself. Almost any other web browser configuration is likely to be
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 unsafe to use with Tor.
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+Tor Browser will block browser plugins such as Flash, RealPlayer,
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 Quicktime, and others: they can be manipulated into revealing your IP address.
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 Similarly, we do not recommend installing additional addons or plugins into
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-the Tor Browser, as these may bypass Tor or otherwise harm your anonymity and
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+Tor Browser, as these may bypass Tor or otherwise harm your anonymity and
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 privacy.
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 </p>
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 <a href="<page about/overview>#thesolution">to and
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 within the Tor network</a>, but the encryption of your traffic to the final
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 destination website depends upon on that website. To help ensure private
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-encryption to websites, the Tor Browser includes <a
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+encryption to websites, Tor Browser includes <a
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 href="https://www.eff.org/https-everywhere">HTTPS Everywhere</a> to force the
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 use of HTTPS encryption with major websites that support it. However, you
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 should still watch the browser URL bar to ensure that websites you provide
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 <p>
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+Tor Browser will warn you before automatically opening documents that are
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 handled by external applications. <b>DO NOT IGNORE THIS WARNING</b>.  You
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 should be very careful when downloading documents via Tor (especially DOC and
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 PDF files, unless you use the PDF viewer that's built into Tor Browser) as
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    <meta http-equiv="X-UA-Compatible" content="IE=edge">
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    <meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1">
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    <meta name="author" content="The Tor Project, Inc.">
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-   <meta name="description" content="Tor is a free software that prevents people from learning your location or browsing habits by letting you communicate anonymously on the Internet. It also helps you bypass censorship online. If you can't open the website, email gettor@torproject.org for instruction on how to get the Tor Browser.">
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+   <meta name="description" content="Tor is a free software that prevents people from learning your location or browsing habits by letting you communicate anonymously on the Internet. It also helps you bypass censorship online. If you can't open the website, email gettor@torproject.org for instruction on how to get Tor Browser.">
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    <meta name="keywords" content="anonymity online, tor, tor project, censorship circumvention, traffic analysis, anonymous communications research">
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    <meta property="og:image" content="https://www.torproject.org/images/tor-logo.jpg">
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 src="$(IMGROOT)/icon-TorBrowser.jpg" alt="TorBrowser Icon" width="75"
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 height="75"></a>
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 <div class="projectdesc"><div class="name"><a href="<page
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-projects/torbrowser>">Tor Browser</a></div> <p>The Tor Browser
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+projects/torbrowser>">Tor Browser</a></div> <p>Tor Browser
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 contains everything you need to safely browse the Internet. This
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 package requires no installation. Just extract it and run.</p>
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 </div></div>
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       <div class="tbb box">
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 #include "side.wmi"
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   <!-- END SIDECOL -->
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-    <div class="pjtitle"><h2>What is the Tor Browser?</h2></div>
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     <div class="pjtext">
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       <p>The <strong>Tor</strong> software protects
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       you by bouncing your communications around a distributed network of
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       watching your Internet connection from learning what sites you visit,
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       it prevents the sites you visit from learning your physical location,
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       and it lets you access sites which are blocked.</p>
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       Windows, Mac OS X, or Linux without needing to install any software.
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       It can run off a USB flash drive, comes with a pre-configured web
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     <!-- Commenting out the videos until support updates them to use TB 4.0
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     <div class="vidtable">
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       <table>
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       of web pages you visited and any cookies will be deleted.</p>
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       <p><a href="$(IMGROOT)/tbb-screenshot3.jpg"><img src="$(IMGROOT)/tbb-screenshot3.jpg" alt="Screenshot of
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       Firefox" width="860" height="645"></a></p>
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       <p>Remember that Tor anonymizes the origin of your traffic,
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       and it encrypts everything inside the Tor network, but <a
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       href="<wikifaq>#ExitEavesdroppers">it can't encrypt your traffic
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       email the <a href="<page about/contact>">help desk</a>.</p>
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       To discuss improvements and submit comments, please use the <a
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       <br>It contains Tor, a modified <a
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       href="https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/organizations/">Firefox
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       ESR</a>, Torbutton, TorLauncher,
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