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Fix the download page warning box.

Also fix a typo in the plugins paragraph.

Mike Perry authored on25/12/2011 00:04:19
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@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ additional addons or plugins into the Tor Browser, as these may bypass Tor or
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 otherwise impede your anonymity. This means Youtube is disabled by default.
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 Youtube provides an experimental
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 <a href="https://www.youtube.com/html5">non-Flash HTML5 mode</a> that works for
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-many videos, but you you must visit that link opt-in manually. Youtube's
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+many videos, but you must visit that link to opt-in manually. Youtube's
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 support for the HTML5 feature is buggy and incomplete, so we are also working
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 to provide a safe way to temporarily enable Flash in future Tor Browser
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 versions.
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@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ that are handled by external applications. <b>DO NOT IGNORE THIS WARNING</b>.
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 You should be very careful when downloading documents via Tor (especially DOC
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 and PDF files) as these documents can contain Internet resources that will be
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 downloaded outside of Tor by the application that opens them. These documents
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-can be modified by malicious exit nodes, or by a website who is trying to trick
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+can be modified by malicious exit nodes, or by a website that is trying to trick
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 you into revealing your non-Tor IP address. If you must work with DOC and/or
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 PDF files, we strongly recommend using a disconnected computer, a 
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 <a href="https://www.virtualbox.org/">VirtualBox</a> free 
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@@ -25,7 +25,8 @@
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 <!-- BEGIN TEASER WARNING -->
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     <div class="warning-top">
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       <h2>Want Tor to really work?</h2>
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-	<p>...then please don't just install it and go on.  You need to change some of your habits, and reconfigure your software! Tor by itself is <em>NOT</em> all you need to maintain your anonymity. Read the <a href="#warning">full list of warnings</a>.
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+	<p>You need to change some of your habits, as some things won't work exactly as
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+you are used to. Please read the <a href="#warning">full list of warnings</a> for details.
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 	</p>
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       </div>
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 <!-- END TEASER WARNING -->
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@@ -282,8 +283,7 @@
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 <a name="Warning"></a>
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 <h2><a class="anchor" href="#warning">Want Tor to really work?</a></h2>
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 	<p>You need to change some of your habits, as some things won't work exactly as
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-you are used to. Please read the <a href="#warning">full list of warnings</a> for details.
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-</p>
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+you are used to.</p>
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 <ol>
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 <li><b>Use the Tor Browser</b>