fix some typos
Roger Dingledine commited on 2008-06-22 07:34:07
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<p> |
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Sometimes it's not possible to directly reach the <a |
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href="https://www.torproject.org/">Tor Project website</a>. We're currently |
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-working on ways to help users find, download and install a current version of |
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-Tor without already having Tor. We know that these suggestions are imperfect |
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+working on ways to help users find, download, and install a current version of |
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+Tor without already having Tor. We know that these suggestions are imperfect, |
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but we hope that users will be able to find Tor indirectly if our website is |
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-blocked. If you're reading this from a search engines cache, directly from our |
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-website or by some other method, we hope these suggestions are helpful. |
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+blocked. If you're reading this from a search engine's cache, directly from our |
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+website, or by some other method, we hope these suggestions are helpful. |
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Additionally, if you have ideas for how to improve these instructions, please |
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<a href="<page contact>">contact us</a> and let us know. |
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</p> |
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<h2>Fetching Tor with Tor: Using your web browser</h2> |
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-If you're already running Tor, you're should be able to download a new Tor |
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+If you're already running Tor, you should be able to download a new Tor |
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securely with your current Tor. You should do this for your friends who don't |
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already have Tor. You can do this from our <a href="<page download>">download |
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page</a> or from a download page on one of the many Tor <a href="<page mirrors>">mirrors</a>. |
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-Plese take care to <a |
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+Please take care to <a |
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href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/VerifyingSignatures">verify |
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the signature</a> of any downloaded package when possible. |
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A Tor mirror is a site that contains an exact copy of our main site. |
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People who cannot reach the Tor website are encouraged to visit our <a |
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href="<page mirrors>">mirrors</a> to download copies of our source code as well |
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-as binary builds for their specifically desired platforms. You may want to use |
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+as binary builds for their desired platforms. You may want to use |
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a search engine to find mirrors if our mirror page is blocked or seemingly |
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-unresponsive. It is very imporant to <a |
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+unresponsive. It is very important to <a |
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href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/VerifyingSignatures">verify |
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the cryptographic signatures</a> of our software when using any mirror. We |
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cannot ensure the safety or security of any package hosted on remote mirrors |
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-without a signature. It's probably safe but a cautious user should check |
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-signatures if possible. |
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+without a signature. It's probably safe, but a cautious user should check |
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+signatures when possible. |
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</p> |
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<h2>Fetching Tor via email: gettor</h2> |
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