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 <p>Few issues affect the legitimacy of the Internet more than protecting

 people's personal data while they're online. Because the vast majority

-of internet traffic passes along public routes, it is relatively easy

-for prying eyes to view the comings and goings of internet users -- and

+of Internet traffic passes along public routes, it is relatively easy

+for prying eyes to view the comings and goings of Internet users -- and

 even gather some important financial or personal information. These

-snoopers can get their information almost anywhere. Like your internet

+snoopers can get their information almost anywhere. Like your Internet

 service provider. Or your favorite website, which may be disclosing your

 shopping patterns. Or maybe a politically rigid government is compiling

 a list of its citizens reading outlawed journals. </p>

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ a list of its citizens reading outlawed journals. </p>

 <p>These activities are commonly called "traffic analysis" and

 corporations, governments and other parties are becoming increasingly

 sophisticated at it. While these organizations remain vague in their

-intentions, their affect on Internet users is clear. For some people,

+intentions, their effect on Internet users is clear. For some people,

 this electronic spying is a nuisance that can affect their pocketbook;

 for others, it could jeopardize their personal security.</p> 

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ functionality, called hidden services, that allows users to publish to

 websites without revealing their location.</p> 

 <p>Tor is compatible with different operating systems, such as  Microsoft

-Windows, Apple Mac, and various versions of Linux Tor works with most

+Windows, Apple Mac, and various versions of Linux. Tor works with most

 programs that connect your computer to the Internet.</p> 

 <p>Today, Tor is used by hundreds of thousands of people to protect their