tor-webwml.git

@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ for every submission!

 Tor is a decentralized network of computers on the Internet that increases

 privacy in Web browsing, instant messaging, and other applications. We

 estimate there are some 200,000 Tor users currently, routing their traffic

-through about 400 volunteer Tor servers on six continents. However, Tor's

+through about 500 volunteer Tor servers on six continents. However, Tor's

 current user interface approach — running as a service in the background

 — does a poor job of communicating network status and security levels

 to the user.

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ applications are using Tor safely.

 <h2>Goals</h2>

 <p>Submitters for phase two will produce a work of <a

 href="http://www.opensource.org/">Open Source Software</a>

-that will provide a user interface to the Tor system by way of the

+that will provide a user interface to the Tor system, perhaps by way of the

 <a href="/cvs/control/doc/howto.txt">Tor Controller Protocol</a>.</p>

 <p>We are looking for a vision of how Tor can work in a user's everyday

@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ anonymous browsing experience.</p>

 for and opening text files.</li>

 <li>Let users learn about the current state of their Tor connection

 (for example, how well the current Tor connection is working),

-and find out whether any of their applications are using it.</li>

+and configure or find out whether any of their applications are using it.</li>

 <li>Make alerts and error conditions visible to the user.</li>

 <li>Run on at least one of Windows, Linux, and OS&nbsp;X, on a

 not-unusually-configured consumer-level machine.</li>