add rransom's proposed improvements, including his Oxford comma
Erinn Clark commited on 2010-10-28 03:41:52
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blocked.</p> |
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<p>The <strong>Tor Browser Bundle</strong> lets you use Tor on |
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- Windows Mac OS X, or Linux without needing to install any software. It |
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- can run off a USB flash drive, comes with a pre-configured web browser |
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- and is self-contained. |
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+ Windows, Mac OS X, or Linux without needing to install any software. It |
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+ can run off a USB flash drive, comes with a pre-configured web |
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+ browser, and is self-contained. |
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The <strong>Tor IM Browser Bundle</strong> additionally allows instant |
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messaging and chat over Tor. |
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<p>Download the file above, save it somewhere, then click on it. Mac OS |
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X will automatically unarchive it and you will have a TorBrowser |
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application in your chosen language (for example, TorBrowser_en-US.app). |
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- Click the file to launch Vidalia. Once Vidalia connects to Tor, it will |
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+ Click the TorBrowser application to launch Vidalia. Once Vidalia connects to Tor, it will |
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launch Firefox.</p> |
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<a id="Linux"></a> |
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