make it clearer there's more at stake here than individuals
Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2004-12-10 20:33:57
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 <p>
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-Currently, Tor development is supported by the <a
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-href="http://www.eff.org/">Electronic Frontier Foundation</a>.
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 Tor's security is improved as its user base grows and as
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 more people volunteer to run servers.  Please consider <a
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 href="cvs/tor/doc/tor-doc.html#installing">installing it</a> and then
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 2004-10-14: Tor 0.0.8.1 is released. [<a href="download.html">download</a>]
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+<p>
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+Currently, Tor development is supported by the <a
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+href="http://www.eff.org/">Electronic Frontier Foundation</a>.
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+Tor was initially designed and developed as part of the Naval Research
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+Laboratory's <a href="http://www.onion-router.net/">Onion Routing</a>
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+program with support from <a href="http://www.onr.navy.mil/">ONR</a>
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+and <a href="http://www.darpa.mil/">DARPA</a>.
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+</p>
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 The or-announce mailing list is a low volume list for announcements of
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 new releases. You can <a href="http://archives.seul.org/or/announce/">read
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 behavior and interests.  This can impact your checkbook if, for example,
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 an e-commerce site uses price discrimination based on your country or
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 institution of origin.  It can even threaten your job and physical safety
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-by revealing who and where you are.
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+by revealing who and where you are. For example, someone travelling
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+abroad who connects to their employer's computers to check or send mail
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+or for other reasons will reveal her national origin and professional
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+affiliation to any local observing the network even if the connection
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+is encrypted.
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 Anonymity is threatened as never before by trends in law, policy, and
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 technology that are undermining our ability to speak and read freely
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-online without being forced to reveal who we are.  With each new user
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-and server, we enhance Tor's ability to restore people's control over
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-their privacy.
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+online without being forced to reveal who we are. These trends also
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+undermine national security and critical infrastructures by making
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+personal, corporate, organization, and government communications more
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+vulnerable. With each new user and server, we enhance Tor's ability
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+to restore control over security and privacy for both individuals and
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+organizations.
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