fix a bug on the frontpage, reported by robert hogan
Roger Dingledine commited on 2007-11-17 13:30:16
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<p>Tor is a software project that helps you defend against <a |
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href="<page overview>">traffic analysis</a>, a form of network |
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surveillance that threatens personal freedom and privacy, confidential |
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-business activities and relationships, and state security. Tor |
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-protects you by encrypting your communications and bouncing them |
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-around a distributed network of relays run by volunteers |
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-all around the world. Tor works with many of your |
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+business activities and relationships, and state security. |
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+Tor protects you by bouncing your communications around a distributed |
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+network of relays run by volunteers all around the world: it prevents |
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+somebody watching your Internet connection from learning what sites you |
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+visit, and it prevents the sites you visit from learning where you're |
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+coming from. |
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+Tor works with many of your |
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existing applications, including web browsers, instant messaging |
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clients, remote login, and other applications based on the Internet's |
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TCP protocol. |
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