fix mistakes and bad links in the osx instructions.
Andrew Lewman

Andrew Lewman commited on 2010-10-11 14:22:26
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     and <a href="http://www.pps.jussieu.fr/~jch/software/polipo/">Polipo</a> (a web proxy)
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     into one package, with the four applications pre-configured to work
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     together.
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-    Download either the <a href="../<package-osx-bundle-stable>">stable</a>
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-    or the <a href="../<package-osx-bundle-alpha>">experimental</a> version
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-    of the OS X bundle for Intel, or look for more options on the <a href="<page
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+    Download either the <a href="<page download/download>#tor">stable</a>
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+    or the <a href="<page download/download>#tor">experimental</a> version
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+    of the OS X bundle, or look for more options on the <a href="<page
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     download/download>">download page</a>.
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     </p>
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     <p>Once you've downloaded the dmg, double-click and let it mount.
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-    Browse to the now open Vidalia Bundle in Finder.  It's easy to install the bundle; simply drag and drop the Vidalia
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-    onion icon to the Applications folder.  Optionally, double click the
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-    "install torbutton" script and let it install torbutton into Firefox.
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-    You can also get Torbutton from Mozilla Add-ons by searching for
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-    "torbutton".</p>
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-    
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-    <p>When you are finished installing, you can start Vidalia by selecting its icon
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-    from your Applications folder. A dark onion with a red X in your dock means
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-    Tor is not currently running. You can start Tor by selecting Start from the
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-    "Tor" menu at the top of your screen.
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+    Browse to the now open Vidalia Bundle in Finder.  It's easy to
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+    install the bundle; simply drag and drop the Vidalia onion icon to the
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+    Applications folder.  Optionally, double click the "install torbutton"
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+    script and let it install torbutton into Firefox.  You can also get
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+    Torbutton from Mozilla Add-ons by searching for "torbutton".</p>
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+    
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+    <p>When you are finished installing, you can start Vidalia by
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+    selecting its icon from your Applications folder. A dark onion with a
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+    red X in your dock means Tor is not currently running. You can start
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+    Tor by selecting Start from the "Tor" menu at the top of your screen.
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     </p>
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     <p>When Tor is running, Vidalia's dock icon will look like the following:
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     </p>
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     <p><img alt="vidalia running tor"
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-    src="$(IMGROOT)/screenshot-osx-vidalia.png"
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-   /></p>
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+    src="$(IMGROOT)/screenshot-osx-vidalia.png" /></p>
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     <p>Polipo is installed as part of the Tor bundle package
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-    installer. Once it is installed, it will start automatically when your
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-    computer is restarted.
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-    You do not need to configure Polipo to use Tor &mdash; a custom Polipo 
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-    configuration for Tor has been installed as part of the installer package.
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+    installer. Once it is installed, it will start automatically when
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+    your computer is restarted.  You do not need to configure Polipo
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+    to use Tor &mdash; a custom Polipo configuration for Tor has been
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+    installed as part of the installer package.
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     </p>
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     <hr>
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     <h2><a class="anchor" href="#using">Step Two: Configure your applications to use Tor</a></h2>
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     <br>
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-    <p>After installing, you need to configure your
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-    applications to use them. The first step is to set up web browsing.</p>
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+    <p>After installing, you need to configure your applications to use
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+    them. The first step is to set up web browsing.</p>
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     <p>You should use Tor with Firefox and Torbutton, for best safety.
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-    Torbutton was installed for you.  Click on the red "Tor Disabled" toggle button to
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-    turn Tor on, and you're all set: </p>
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+    Torbutton was installed for you.  Click on the red "Tor Disabled"
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+    toggle button to turn Tor on, and you're all set: </p>
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     <p><img alt="Torbutton plugin for Firefox"
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-    src="$(IMGROOT)/screenshot-torbutton.png"
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-   /></p>
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-    
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-    <p>
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-    If you plan to run Firefox on a different computer than Tor, see the <a
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-    href="<wikifaq>#SocksListenAddress">FAQ
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-    entry for running Tor on a different computer</a>.
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-    </p>
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-    <p>To Torify other applications that support HTTP proxies, just
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-    point them at Polipo (that is, localhost port 8118). To use SOCKS
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-    directly (for instant messaging, Jabber, IRC, etc), you can point
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-    your application directly at Tor (localhost port 9050), but see <a
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-    href="<wikifaq>#SOCKSAndDNS">this
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-    FAQ entry</a> for why this may be dangerous. For applications
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+    src="$(IMGROOT)/screenshot-torbutton.png" /></p>
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+    
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+    <p> If you plan to run Firefox on a different computer than Tor,
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+    see the <a href="<wikifaq>#SocksListenAddress">FAQ entry for running
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+    Tor on a different computer</a>.  </p>
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+    
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+    <p>To Torify other applications that support HTTP proxies,
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+    just point them at Polipo (that is, localhost port 8118). To
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+    use SOCKS directly (for instant messaging, Jabber, IRC, etc),
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+    you can point your application directly at Tor (localhost
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+    port 9050), but see <a href="<wikifaq>#SOCKSAndDNS">this FAQ
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+    entry</a> for why this may be dangerous. For applications
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     that support neither SOCKS nor HTTP, take a look at <a
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-    href="http://www.taiyo.co.jp/~gotoh/ssh/connect.html">connect</a> or
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-    <a href="http://www.dest-unreach.org/socat/">socat</a>.</p>
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+    href="http://www.taiyo.co.jp/~gotoh/ssh/connect.html">connect</a>
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+    or <a href="http://www.dest-unreach.org/socat/">socat</a>.</p>
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     <p>For information on how to Torify other applications, check out the
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-    <a href="<wiki>/TheOnionRouter/TorifyHOWTO">Torify
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-    HOWTO</a>.
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+    <a href="<wiki>/TheOnionRouter/TorifyHOWTO">Torify HOWTO</a>.
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     </p>
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     <p>
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     Next, you should try using your browser with Tor and make
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-    sure that your IP address is being anonymized. Click on
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-    <a href="https://check.torproject.org/">the
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-    Tor detector</a>
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-    and see whether it thinks you're using Tor or not.
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-    (If that site is down, see <a
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-    href="<wikifaq>#IsMyConnectionPrivate">this
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-    FAQ entry</a> for more suggestions on how to test your Tor.)
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+    sure that your IP address is being anonymized. Click on <a
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+    href="https://check.torproject.org/">the Tor detector</a> and see
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+    whether it thinks you're using Tor or not.  (If that site is down,
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+    see <a href="<wikifaq>#IsMyConnectionPrivate">this FAQ entry</a>
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+    for more suggestions on how to test your Tor.)
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     </p>
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     <p>If you have a personal firewall that limits your computer's
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     </p>
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     <p>If it's still not working, look at <a
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-    href="<wikifaq>#ItDoesntWork">this
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-    FAQ entry</a> for hints.</p>
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+    href="<wikifaq>#ItDoesntWork">this FAQ entry</a> for hints.</p>
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     <p>
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-    Once it's working, learn more about
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-    <a href="<page download/download>#Warning">what Tor does and does not offer</a>.
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+    Once it's working, learn more about <a href="<page
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+    download/download>#Warning">what Tor does and does not offer</a>.
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     </p>
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     IP addresses.</p>
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     <p>Having relays in many different places on the Internet is what
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-    makes Tor users secure. <a
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-    href="<wikifaq>#RelayAnonymity">You
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-    may also get stronger anonymity yourself</a>,
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-    since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
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-    computer or were relayed from others.</p>
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+    makes Tor users secure. <a href="<wikifaq>#RelayAnonymity">You may
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+    also get stronger anonymity yourself</a>, since remote sites can't
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+    know whether connections originated at your computer or were relayed
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+    from others.</p>
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     <p>Read more at our <a href="<page docs/tor-doc-relay>">Configuring a relay</a>
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     guide.</p>
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     <h2><a class="anchor" href="#uninstall">How To Uninstall Tor and Privoxy</a></h2>
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-    <p>There are two ways to uninstall the bundle from your computer, using
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-    Finder or a command line or Terminal-based uninstaller.  If you want to remove Tor on OSX, here's how:</p>
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+    <p>There are two ways to uninstall the bundle from your computer,
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+    using Finder or a command line or Terminal-based uninstaller.
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+    If you want to remove Tor on OSX, here's how:</p>
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-    <p>Change your application proxy settings back to their original values.
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-       If you just want to stop using Tor, you can end at this point.</p>
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+    <p>Change your application proxy settings back to their original
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+    values.  If you just want to stop using Tor, you can end at this
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+    point.</p>
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     <p>If you want to completely remove Tor, and your account has Admin
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     Privileges, then proceed as follows:</p>
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