clarify what sort of encryption. maybe. more words at least.
Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2008-11-23 08:38:45
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 <p>Anonymity and Security:</p>
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-<li><a href="#KeyManagement">What are all these keys used for?</a></li>
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+<li><a href="#KeyManagement">Tell me about all the keys Tor uses.</a></li>
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-<h3><a class="anchor" href="#KeyManagement">What are all these keys
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+<h3><a class="anchor" href="#KeyManagement">Tell me about all the keys
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+Tor uses.</a></h3>
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 Tor uses a variety of different keys, with three goals in mind: 1)
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-encryption (inside the Tor network), 2) authentication so you know you're
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-talking to the relays you meant to talk to, and 3) signatures to make
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-sure all users know the same set of relays.
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+encryption to ensure privacy of data within the Tor network, 2)
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+authentication so clients know they're
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+talking to the relays they meant to talk to, and 3) signatures to make
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+sure all clients know the same set of relays.
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