Use "Tor" as a descriptor rather than a noun; add anchors for the page sections; make 0.0.8 into a variable.
Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2008-03-04 02:12:38
Zeige 2 geänderte Dateien mit 32 Einfügungen und 24 Löschungen.

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 <define-tag version-stable whitespace=delete>0.1.2.19</define-tag>
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-<define-tag version-alpha whitespace=delete>0.2.0.20-rc</define-tag>
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+<define-tag version-alpha whitespace=delete>0.2.0.21-rc</define-tag>
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 <define-tag version-win32-stable whitespace=delete>0.1.2.19</define-tag>
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 <define-tag version-win32-alpha whitespace=delete>0.2.0.20-rc</define-tag>
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 <define-tag version-rpmsuse-stable whitespace=delete>0.1.2.19</define-tag>
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 <define-tag version-rpmsuse-alpha whitespace=delete>0.2.0.20.rc</define-tag>
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+<define-tag version-torbrowserbundle whitespace=delete>0.0.8</define-tag>
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 <define-tag package-rpm4-stable whitespace=delete>dist/rpm/tor-<version-rpm4-stable>-tor.0.rh4_6.i386.rpm</define-tag>
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 <define-tag package-srpm4-stable whitespace=delete>dist/rpm/tor-<version-rpm4-stable>-tor.0.rh4_6.src.rpm</define-tag>
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 <h2>Tor Browser Bundle</h2>
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 <hr>
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-<p><strong>Tor</strong> is a software project that protects you by bouncing
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+<p>The <strong>Tor</strong> software protects you by bouncing
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 your communications around a distributed network of relays run by volunteers
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 all around the world: it prevents somebody watching your Internet connection
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 from learning what sites you visit, it prevents the sites you visit from
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 install any software.  It can run off a USB flash drive, comes with a
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 pre-configured web browser and is self contained.  If you would prefer to use
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 your existing web browser, install Tor permanently, or if you don't use
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-Windows, see the other ways to <a href="/download.html.en">download
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+Windows, see the other ways to <a href="<page download>">download
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 Tor</a>.</p>
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-<h3>Download Tor Browser bundle</h3>
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+<a id="Download"></a>
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+<h3><a class="anchor" href="#Download">Download Tor Browser bundle</a></h3>
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-<p>To start using the Tor Browser bundle, download the file for your preferred
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+<p>To start using the Tor Browser Bundle, download the file for your preferred
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 language. This file can be saved wherever is convenient, e.g. the Desktop or a
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 USB flash drive.</p>
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-<p style="font-size: 120%; margin: 5mm">Tor Browser Bundle for Windows (version 0.0.8, 13 MB)</p>
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+<p style="font-size: 120%; margin: 5mm">Tor Browser Bundle for Windows (version <version-torbrowserbundle>, 13 MB)</p>
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 <ul>
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-<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_en-US.exe">English (en-US)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_en-US.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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+<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_en-US.exe">English (en-US)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_en-US.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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-<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_ar.exe">&#x0627;&#x0644;&#x0639;&#x0631;&#x0628;&#x064a;&#x0629; (ar)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_ar.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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+<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_ar.exe">&#x0627;&#x0644;&#x0639;&#x0631;&#x0628;&#x064a;&#x0629; (ar)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_ar.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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-<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_de.exe">Deutsch (de)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_de.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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+<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_de.exe">Deutsch (de)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_de.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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-<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_es-ES.exe">&#x0045;&#x0073;&#x0070;&#x0061;&#x00f1;&#x006f;&#x006c; (es-ES)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_es-ES.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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+<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_es-ES.exe">&#x0045;&#x0073;&#x0070;&#x0061;&#x00f1;&#x006f;&#x006c; (es-ES)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_es-ES.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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-<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_fa-IR.exe">&#x0641;&#x0627;&#x0631;&#x0633;&#x06cc; (fa-IR)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_fa-IR.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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+<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_fa-IR.exe">&#x0641;&#x0627;&#x0631;&#x0633;&#x06cc; (fa-IR)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_fa-IR.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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-<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_fr.exe">&#x0046;&#x0072;&#x0061;&#x006e;&#x00e7;&#x0061;&#x0069;&#x0073; (fr)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_fr.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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+<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_fr.exe">&#x0046;&#x0072;&#x0061;&#x006e;&#x00e7;&#x0061;&#x0069;&#x0073; (fr)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_fr.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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-<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_nl.exe">Nederlands (nl)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_nl.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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+<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_nl.exe">Nederlands (nl)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_nl.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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-<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_pt-PT.exe">&#x0050;&#x006f;&#x0072;&#x0074;&#x0075;&#x0067;&#x0075;&#x00ea;&#x0073; (pt-PT)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_pt-PT.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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+<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_pt-PT.exe">&#x0050;&#x006f;&#x0072;&#x0074;&#x0075;&#x0067;&#x0075;&#x00ea;&#x0073; (pt-PT)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_pt-PT.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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-<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_ru.exe">&#x0420;&#x0443;&#x0441;&#x0441;&#x043a;&#x0438;&#x0439; (ru)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_ru.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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+<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_ru.exe">&#x0420;&#x0443;&#x0441;&#x0441;&#x043a;&#x0438;&#x0439; (ru)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_ru.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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-<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_zh-CN.exe">&#x7b80;&#x4f53;&#x5b57; (zh-CN)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-0.0.8_zh-CN.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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+<li><a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_zh-CN.exe">&#x7b80;&#x4f53;&#x5b57; (zh-CN)</a> (<a href="dist/tor-browser-<version-torbrowserbundle>_zh-CN.exe.asc" style="font-size: 80%;">signature</a>)</li>
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 to verify package signatures</a>, which allows you to make sure you've
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 downloaded the file we intended you to get.</p>
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-<h3>Extraction</h3>
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 <p>Download the file above, and save it somewhere, then double click on it.
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 Click on the button labelled <strong>"..."</strong> (1) and select where you want
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 <p><img src="img/screenshot1.png" alt="Screenshot of extraction process"></p>
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+<h3><a class="anchor" href="#Usage">Usage</a></h3>
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 <p>Once extraction is complete, open the folder <strong>Tor Browser</strong> from the location you saved the bundle.</p>
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 <p>Once Tor is ready, Firefox will automatically be opened. Only web pages
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 visited through the included Firefox browser will be sent via Tor. Other web
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-browsers, such as Internet Explorer are not affected. Make sure that it says
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+browsers such as Internet Explorer are not affected. Make sure that it says
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 <span style="color: #0a0">"Tor Enabled"</span> (5) in the bottom right corner
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 before using it. To reduce the risk of confusion, don't run Firefox while using
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-the Tor Browser Bundle, and close existing windows before starting.</p>
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+the Tor Browser Bundle, and close existing Firefox windows before starting.</p>
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 <p><img src="img/screenshot3.png" alt="Screenshot of Firefox"></p>
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 on the <img src="img/close-button.png" alt="Close button (&times;)"> (6).
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 Vidalia and Tor will automatically close.  For privacy reasons, the list of
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 webpages you visited and any cookies will be deleted. To use it again, repeat
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+<a id="Feedback"></a>
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 <p>The Tor Browser Bundle is under development and not yet complete.
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 To discuss improvements and submit comments, please use the <a
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 href="http://archives.seul.org/or/talk/">or-talk</a> mailing list.</p>
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 <h3>More information</h3>
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 <p><strong>What is Tor and why do I need it?</strong> To learn more about Tor, visit the <a
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 <p><strong>What is in the Tor Browser Bundle?</strong> It
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 contains Tor, Vidalia, Polipo, Firefox, and Torbutton (<a
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+href="<page torbrowser/details>#contents">learn more</a>).</p>
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 <p><strong>How can I make my own bundle?</strong> To download
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 </div><!-- #main -->
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