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Roger Dingledine commited on 2007-10-23 03:34:52
Zeige 2 geänderte Dateien mit 5 Einfügungen und 6 Löschungen.
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@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ is <a href="irc://irc.oftc.net/tor">#tor on irc.oftc.net</a>.</li> |
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<li>We have a <a |
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href="http://bugs.torproject.org/tor">bugtracker</a>. |
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If you have a bug, especially a crash bug, read <a |
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-href="http://wiki.noreply.org/wiki/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#ServerCrashing">how |
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+href="http://wiki.noreply.org/wiki/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#RelayCrashing">how |
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to report a Tor bug</a> first and then tell us as much information |
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about it as you can in the bugtracker. (If your bug is |
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with Privoxy, your browser, or some other application, please don't put |
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@@ -29,7 +29,8 @@ href="<page overview>">traffic analysis</a>, a form of network |
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surveillance that threatens personal freedom and privacy, confidential |
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business activities and relationships, and state security. Tor |
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protects you by encrypting your communications and bouncing them |
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-around a distributed network of servers. Tor works with many of your |
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+around a distributed network of relays run by volunteers |
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+all around the world. Tor works with many of your |
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existing applications, including web browsers, instant messaging |
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clients, remote login, and other applications based on the Internet's |
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TCP protocol. |
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@@ -60,14 +61,12 @@ you should not rely solely on the current Tor network if you really need |
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strong anonymity.) |
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</p> |
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<p> |
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-Tor works by bouncing your traffic around a set of relays run by |
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-volunteers all around the world. Tor's security improves as its user |
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+Tor's security improves as its user |
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base grows and as more people volunteer to |
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<a href="<page docs/tor-doc-relay>">run relays</a>. (It isn't |
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nearly as hard to set up as you might think, and can significantly |
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-<a href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#ServerAnonymity"> |
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+<a href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#RelayAnonymity"> |
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enhance your own security against some attacks</a>.) |
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If running a relay isn't for you, we need |
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<a href="<page volunteer>">help with many other aspects of the project</a>, |
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