minor touch-ups
Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2012-08-04 09:37:51
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-#include "head.wmi" TITLE="Tor Project: Jobs (browser hacker)" CHARSET="UTF-8"
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+#include "head.wmi" TITLE="Tor Project: Jobs (project coordinator)" CHARSET="UTF-8"
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     <a href="<page index>">Home &raquo; </a>
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 <p>
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 A project coordinator is the person who coordinates and helps track
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-deliverables, progress, and provide metrics on past and current
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+deliverables, progress, and metrics on past and current
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 performance of projects.
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 <li>Deriving deliverables, deadlines, and milestones for each active
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 contract.</li>
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 <li>Developing timelines and schedules for completion of milestones and
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- deliverables for each active, and occassionally proposed, contract.<li>
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+ deliverables for each active, and occassionally proposed, contract.</li>
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 <li>Collecting ideas and potential deliverables for the future.</li>
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 <li>Raising concerns, timeline slips, and probability of missed deadlines
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 to management.</li>
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 <li>Helping to write the monthly progress reports required for contracts.</li>
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-<p>In general, you should be:</p>
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+<p>In general, you should:</p>
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 <ul>
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 <li>Be comfortable and experienced justifying and documenting technical
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 decisions for a public, world-wide technical audience.</li>
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