clean up other phrasing
Roger Dingledine commited on 2004-12-13 04:56:29
Zeige 2 geänderte Dateien mit 2 Einfügungen und 3 Löschungen.
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@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ on the current Tor network if you really need strong anonymity. |
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<p> |
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Currently, Tor development is supported by the <a |
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href="http://www.eff.org/">Electronic Frontier Foundation</a>. |
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-Tor was initially designed and developed as part of the Naval Research |
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+Tor was initially designed and developed as part of the U.S. Naval Research |
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Laboratory's <a href="http://www.onion-router.net/">Onion Routing</a> |
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program with support from <a href="http://www.onr.navy.mil/">ONR</a> |
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and <a href="http://www.darpa.mil/">DARPA</a>. |
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@@ -207,8 +207,7 @@ online without being forced to reveal who we are. These trends also |
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undermine national security and critical infrastructures by making |
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personal, corporate, organization, and government communications more |
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vulnerable. With each new user and server, we enhance Tor's ability |
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-to restore control over security and privacy for both individuals and |
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-organizations. |
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+to restore your control over your security and privacy. |
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</p> |
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