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 wide variety of reasons: journalists and

 bloggers, human rights workers, law enforcement officers, soldiers,

 corporations, citizens of repressive regimes, and just ordinary

-citizens.  See the <a href="<page overview>">overview page</a> for a

+citizens.  See the <a href="<page torusers>">Who Uses Tor?</a> page for

+examples of typical tor users.  See the <a href="<page overview>">overview page</a> for a

 more detailed explanation of what Tor does, why this diversity of

 users is important, and how Tor works.

 </p>

 <p>

-(There are three pieces of fine print you need to know about.

-First, Tor does not protect you if you do not use it correctly.

+There are three pieces of fine print you need to know about.

+<ol>

+<li>Tor does not protect you if you do not use it correctly.

 Read <a href="<page download>#Warning">our list of warnings</a> and

 make sure to follow the

 <a href="<page documentation>#RunningTor">instructions for your platform</a>

-carefully. Second, even if you configure and use Tor correctly,

-there are still

+carefully.</li>

+<li> Even if you configure and use Tor correctly, there are still

 <a href="https://wiki.torproject.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#RemainingAttacks"

 >

-potential attacks that could compromise Tor's ability to protect you</a>.

-Third, no anonymity system is perfect these days, and Tor is no exception:

+potential attacks that could compromise Tor's ability to protect

+you</a>.</li>

+<li>No anonymity system is perfect these days, and Tor is no exception:

 you should not rely solely on the current Tor network if you really need

-strong anonymity.)

+strong anonymity.</li>

+</ol>

 </p>

 <p>