tor-webwml.git

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@

 <hr />

 <p>

-The canonical URL of this site is <a href="https://www.torproject.org/">https://www.torproject.org</a>,

+The canonical URL of this site is <a href="https://www.torproject.org/">https://www.torproject.org/</a>,

 but there are a few mirrors of it in other places.

 </p>

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ that organization.

 <p>

 Groups such as Indymedia recommend Tor for safeguarding their members'

 online privacy and security. Activist groups like the Electronic Frontier

-Foundation (EFF) are supporting Tor's development as a mechanism for

+Foundation (EFF) recommend Tor as a mechanism for

 maintaining civil liberties online. Corporations use Tor as a safe way

 to conduct competitive analysis, and to protect sensitive procurement

 patterns from eavesdroppers. They also use it to replace traditional

@@ -64,10 +64,10 @@ new versions of the pictures.</li>

 <li>Translated pages should link to the other translated pages.</li>

 <li>Translated pages should include a note in foot.wmi, translated to the

-appropriate language: "Neither the Tor developers nor EFF have reviewed

+appropriate language: "The Tor developers have not reviewed

 this translation for accuracy and correctness. It may be out of date

 or wrong. The official Tor web site is the English version, available

-at <a href="https://www.torproject.org">https://www.torproject.org/</a>"</li>

+at <a href="https://www.torproject.org/">https://www.torproject.org/</a>"</li>

 <li>Use valid <a href="http://roselli.org/adrian/articles/character_charts.asp">character entities</a>.

 Even though most browsers display the characters correctly these days, we want