a few more fixes
Roger Dingledine commited on 2008-06-17 04:07:17
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- projects/en/hidserv.wml ad45cd326..9850b9cf1
- projects/en/lowbandwidth.wml 39671d80a..4b7f3ebec
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@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ implementation and testing work on January 15, 2009. |
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<td> |
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<small><em>The original goal of analyzing the problems that lead to |
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slowdown of Tor Hidden Services has been accomplished. Part of this |
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- analysis were measurements of the delay that a user experiences when |
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+ analysis was measuring the delay that a user experiences when |
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setting up or accessing a hidden service. Furthermore, measurement data |
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from April 2008 could be leveraged to explore timings of internal |
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substeps of establishing a connection to a hidden service. The results |
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<a href="http://archives.seul.org/or/dev/Jun-2008/msg00019.html">developer |
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mailing list</a>.</small></em> |
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- <small><em>The analysis has unveiled a few bugs which were responsible |
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- in part for the delay in making a hidden service available for |
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+ <small><em>The analysis also unveiled a few bugs which were responsible |
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+ for part of the delay in making a hidden service available for |
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clients. Some bugs have been fixed subsequent to the analysis, others |
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will be fixed soon. The evaluation has further brought up several |
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possible approaches to improve Tor Hidden Service performance. Some of |
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these ideas can be applied immediately, while others require deeper |
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analysis and new measurements. Finally, in the course of the analysis, |
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- it has been discovered that some improvements require more in-depth |
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+ we discovered that some improvements require more in-depth |
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changes to Tor which are not directly related to hidden services. These |
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changes cannot be achieved in the time frame of this |
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project.</small></em> |
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138</a> shrinks consensus documents by 30% to |
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40% and has already been implemented and merged into the spec. |
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Implementation is part of the 0.2.1.x-alpha tree and the code will |
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- take effect used once over two-thirds of the directory authorities |
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+ take effect once over two-thirds of the directory authorities |
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(i.e. 5 out of 6) have upgraded.</small></em> |
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<small><em><a href="https://svn.torproject.org/svn/tor/trunk/doc/spec/proposals/140-consensus-diffs.txt">Proposal |
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