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@@ -14,22 +14,36 @@

     <hr>

-    <h3>Sometimes the Tor network is censored, and you can't connect it.</h3>

+    <h3>Sometimes the Tor network is censored, and you can't connect to

+    it.</h3>

     <br />

-    <p>An increasing number of censoring countries are using Deep Packet Inspection (DPI) to classify Internet traffic flows by protocol. While Tor uses <a href="<page docs/bridges>">bridge relays</a> to get around a censor that blocks by IP address, the censor can use DPI to recognize and filter Tor traffic flows even when they connect to unexpected IP addresses.

+    <p>

+    An increasing number of censoring countries are using Deep Packet

+    Inspection (DPI) to classify Internet traffic flows by protocol.

+    While Tor uses <a href="<page docs/bridges>">bridge relays</a> to

+    get around a censor that blocks by IP address, the censor can use

+    DPI to recognize and filter Tor traffic flows even when they connect

+    to unexpected IP addresses.

     </p>

     <h3>Pluggable Transports help you bypass censorship against Tor.</h3>

     <br />

-    <p>Pluggable Transports (PT) transform the Tor traffic flow between the client and the bridge. This way, censors who monitor traffic between the client and the bridge will see innocent-looking transformed traffic instead of the actual Tor traffic. External programs can talk to Tor clients and Tor bridges using the <a href="https://gitweb.torproject.org/torspec.git/tree/pt-spec.txt">pluggable transport API</a>, to make it easier to build interoperable programs.

+    <p>

+    Pluggable Transports (PT) transform the Tor traffic flow between the client

+    and the bridge. This way, censors who monitor traffic between the client

+    and the bridge will see innocent-looking transformed traffic instead of the

+    actual Tor traffic.

+    External programs can talk to Tor clients and Tor bridges using the <a

+    href="https://gitweb.torproject.org/torspec.git/tree/pt-spec.txt">pluggable

+    transport API</a>, to make it easier to build interoperable programs.

     </p>

-    <h3>Here you will learn:</h3>

+    <h3>Learn more:</h3>

     <br />

@@ -58,27 +72,39 @@

     <br />

-    <p>Anyone can set up a PT bridge server and help provide bandwidth to users who needs it. Once you set up a transport type, your bridge will automatically advertise support for the transport in its descriptor.</p>

+    <p>

+    Anyone can set up a PT bridge server and help provide bandwidth to users

+    who needs it. Once you set up a transport type, your bridge will

+    automatically advertise support for the transport in its descriptor.

+    </p>

-    <p><strong>obfs4</strong> is currently the most effective transport to bypass censorship. We are asking voluntters to run bridges for it.<br />

-    To learn how to run this transport, please visit the <a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports/obfs4proxy">obfs4proxy wiki page</a>.

+    <p>

+    <strong>obfs4</strong> is currently the most effective transport to bypass

+    censorship. We are asking voluntters to run bridges for it.<br /> To learn

+    how to run this transport, please visit the <a

+    href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports/obfs4proxy">obfs4proxy

+    wiki page</a>.

     </p>

-    <p><a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports#BecomeaPTbridgeoperator">Go to our wiki</a> to learn how to set up other types of PTs.</p>

+    <p>

+    <a

+    href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports#BecomeaPTbridgeoperator">Go

+    to our wiki</a> to learn how to set up other types of PTs.

+    </p>

     <hr>

     <h2 id="developer">Become a PT developer:</h2>

-    <p> The links below are the main documentation that will help guide through what you should consider while designing your PT:</p>

+    <p> The links below are the main documentation for PT developers</p>

     <ul>

         <li><a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports/GuidelinesForDeployingPTs">Guidelines for deploying Pluggable Transports on Tor Browser</a></li>

-        <li><a href="https://gitweb.torproject.org/torspec.git/tree/pt-spec.txt">PT technical spec</a>​</li>

+        <li><a href="https://gitweb.torproject.org/torspec.git/tree/pt-spec.txt">PT technical spec</a></li>

         <li><a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports/PTEvaluationCriteria">Pluggable Transports Evaluation Criteria</a></li>

     </ul>

-    <p><a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports">Our wiki</a> is also a great source of information, such as how to <a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports#Waystofollowandjointheconversation:">get in touch with the community</a>, <a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports/ideas">ideas for new PTs</a>, how to <a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports/WorkListForDevsToHelpOutWith">help with PTs already deployed</a> and much more.</p>

+    <p><a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports">Our wiki</a> is also a great source of information, such as how to <a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports#Waystofollowandjointheconversation">get in touch with the community</a>, <a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports/ideas">ideas for new PTs</a>, how to <a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports/WorkListForDevsToHelpOutWith">help with PTs already deployed</a> and much more.</p>

     <hr>

@@ -102,7 +128,7 @@

         <li><a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/meek"><b>meek</b></a></li>

             <ul>

-                <li><strong>Description:</strong> Is a transport that uses HTTP for carrying bytes and TLS for obfuscation. Traffic is relayed through a third-party server (​Google App Engine). It uses a trick to talk to the third party so that it looks like it is talking to an unblocked server.</li>

+                <li><strong>Description:</strong> Is a transport that uses HTTP for carrying bytes and TLS for obfuscation. Traffic is relayed through a third-party server (Google App Engine). It uses a trick to talk to the third party so that it looks like it is talking to an unblocked server.</li>

                 <li><strong>Language:</strong> Go</li>

                 <li><strong>Maintainer:</strong> David Fifield</li>

                 <li><strong>Evaluation:</strong> <a href="https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/doc/PluggableTransports/MeekEvaluation">meek Evaluation</a></li>