tweaks from talking to weasel
Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2012-12-02 10:28:11
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     <p>
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     Add the <a href="<page docs/debian>#development">development Tor
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     APT repository</a> and run the specified commands to install tor
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-    and deb.torproject.org-keyring. You need Tor 0.2.4.x Tor because
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+    and deb.torproject.org-keyring. You need Tor 0.2.4.x because
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     it knows how to automatically report your obfsproxy address to <a
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     href="https://bridges.torproject.org/?transport=obfs2">BridgeDB</a>.
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     </p>
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 Exitpolicy reject *:*
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 \## CHANGEME_1 -> provide a nickname for your bridge, can be anything you like
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-Nickname CHANGEME_1
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+\#Nickname CHANGEME_1
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 \## CHANGEME_2 -> provide some email address so we can contact you if there's a problem
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 \#ContactInfo CHANGEME_2
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     </pre>
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     <p>
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-    Don't forget to edit the <i>CHANGEME</i> fields!
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+    Don't forget to uncomment and edit the <i>CHANGEME</i> fields!
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     </p>
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     <h3>Step 3: Launch Tor and verify that it bootstraps</h3>
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     <p>
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-    If Tor is earlier in the bootstrapping phase, wait till it gets to
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+    If Tor is earlier in the bootstrapping phase, wait until it gets to
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     100%.
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     </p>
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