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@@ -198,17 +198,17 @@ implementation and testing work on January 15, 2009.

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     <small><em>All bugs that have been found in the analysis have been

     fixed. This includes the 2 bugs that have already been fixed during the

-    analysis and 4 more that could be fixed within the last month. While

+    analysis and 4 more bugs that were fixed within the past 30 days. While

     the bugfixes remove unintended performance bottlenecks due to

     programming errors, some of the design changes that have been spotted

     in the previous analysis have side-effects on anonymity or overall

-    network load which need to be weighed up against individual performance

+    network load which need to be evaluated against individual performance

     gains. A <a href="http://freehaven.net/~karsten/hidserv/discussion-2008-07-15.pdf">report</a>

     has been published to the

     <a href="http://archives.seul.org/or/dev/Jul-2008/msg00034.html">developer

     mailing list</a> including 7 possible design changes that need to be

     discussed. Some evaluations (namely Low-Bandwidth Measurements and the

-    Grand Scaling Plan) had to be scheduled for a later time in the

+    Grand Scaling Plan) will be scheduled for a later time in the

     project. Although the current plan is to perform these evaluations

     within the timeframe until January 15, it is unlikely that their

     results can be applied in the schedule of this project.</em></small>