Clarify Tor Browser Bundle (suggestions from Chris)
Steven Murdoch

Steven Murdoch commited on 2008-03-02 19:48:13
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 <h2>Tor Browser Bundle</h2>
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-<h3>Download</h3>
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+<p><strong>Tor</strong> is a software project that protects you by bouncing
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+your communications around a distributed network of relays run by volunteers
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+all around the world: it prevents somebody watching your Internet connection
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+from learning what sites you visit, it prevents the sites you visit from
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+learning your physical location, and it lets you access sites which are
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+blocked.</p>
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+<p>The <strong>Tor Browser Bundle</strong> lets you use Tor without needing to
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+install any software.  It can run off a USB flash drive, comes with a
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+pre-configured web browser and is self contained.  If you would prefer to use
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+your existing web browser, install Tor permanently, or if you don't use
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+Windows, see the other ways to <a href="/download.html.en">download
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+Tor</a>.</p>
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+<h3>Download Tor Browser bundle</h3>
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+<p>To start using the Tor Browser bundle, download the file for your preferred
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+language. This file can be saved wherever is convenient, e.g. the Desktop or a
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+USB flash drive.</p>
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 <p style="font-size: 120%; margin: 5mm">Tor Browser Bundle for Windows (version 0.0.8, 13 MB)</p>
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+<p>See our instructions on <a
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+href="https://wiki.torproject.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/VerifyingSignatures">how
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+to verify package signatures</a>, which allows you to make sure you've
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+downloaded the file we intended you to get.</p>
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 <h3>Extraction</h3>
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-<p>Double click on the file downloaded above. Click on the button
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-labelled <strong>...</strong> and select where you want to extract the
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-bundle (either the hard disk or a USB pen drive), then click
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-<strong>OK</strong>. At least 50&nbsp;MB free space must be available in the location you select.</p>
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+<p>Download the file above, and save it somewhere, then double click on it.
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+Click on the button labelled <strong>"..."</strong> and select where you want
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+to save the bundle then click <strong>OK</strong>. At least 50&nbsp;MB free
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+space must be available in the location you select. If you want to leave the
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+bundle on the computer, saving it to the Desktop is a good choice. If you want
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+to move it to a different computer or limit the traces you leave behind, save
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+it to a USB disk.</p>
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 <p>Click <strong>Extract</strong> to begin extraction. This may take a
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 few minutes to complete.</p>
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 <h3>Usage</h3>
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-<p>Once extraction is complete, open the folder <strong>Tor Browser</strong> from the location you extracted the bundle.</p>
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+<p>Once extraction is complete, open the folder <strong>Tor Browser</strong> from the location you saved the bundle.</p>
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 <p>Double click on the <strong>Start Tor Browser</strong> application (it may be called
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 <strong>Start Tor Browser.bat</strong> on some systems.)</p>
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 <p><img src="img/screenshot2.png" alt="Screenshot of bundle startup"></p>
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-<p>Once Tor is ready, Firefox will automatically be opened.</p>
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+<p>Once Tor is ready, Firefox will automatically be opened. Only web pages
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+visited through the included Firefox browser will be sent via Tor. Other web
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+browsers, such as Internet Explorer are not affected. Make sure that it says
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+<span style="color: #0a0">"Tor Enabled"</span> in the bottom right corner
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+before using it.</p>
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 <p><img src="img/screenshot3.png" alt="Screenshot of Firefox"></p>
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 <p>Once you are finished browsing, close any open Firefox windows. Vidalia and
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-Tor will automatically close. For privacy reasons, the list of webpages you visited and any cookies will be deleted.<p>
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+Tor will automatically close. For privacy reasons, the list of webpages you
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+visited and any cookies will be deleted. To use it again, repeat the steps in
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+"Usage".<p>
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 <h3>Comments and suggestions</h3>
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