get rid of the "unnecessary software jargon"
Roger Dingledine

Roger Dingledine commited on 2011-09-27 06:54:21
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     <p>
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     These organizations are not the same as <a href="<page
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     donate/donate>">The Tor Project, Inc</a>, but we consider that a
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-    feature. They're both run by nice people.
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+    good thing. They're both run by nice people who are part of the
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+    Tor community.
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     </p>
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     <p>
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     improving Tor's anonymity more than by donating. At the same time
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     though, economies
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     of scale for bandwidth mean that combining many small donations into
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-    several larger relays is much more efficient at improving network
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+    several larger relays is more efficient at improving network
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     performance. Improving anonymity and improving performance are both
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     worthwhile goals, so however you can help is great!
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     </p>
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