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Martin Peck commited on 2009-03-26 05:18:07
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<h2>What Is It?</h2> |
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<p>Tor VM is an experimental transparent Tor proxy for Windows that uses Qemu |
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-virtualization technology for more resilient Tor clients and relays. |
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+virtualization technology for more resilient clients and relays. |
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<p><strong>This initial 0.0.1 release is a work in progress!</strong> |
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See the |
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<p>The bundle packages are preferred since they include Vidalia and other Tor |
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software that improves the user experience. If a portable Tor VM instance is |
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-required then the self extracting archive can be used to install Tor VM alone |
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+required the self extracting archive can be used to install Tor VM alone |
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onto a portable storage device.</p> |
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<ul> |
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