tor-webwml.git

@@ -83,7 +83,9 @@ href="https://addons.mozilla.org/firefox/2275/">Torbutton</a> extension.

 <li>Browser plugins such as Java, Flash, ActiveX, RealPlayer,

 Quicktime, Adobe's PDF plugin, and others can be manipulated

-into revealing your IP address. You should probably uninstall your plugins

+into revealing your IP address. You should probably

+<a href="http://plugindoc.mozdev.org/faqs/uninstall.html">uninstall your

+plugins</a>

 (go to "about:plugins" to see what is installed), or investigate <a

 href="https://addons.mozilla.org/firefox/1237/">QuickJava</a>, <a

 href="https://addons.mozilla.org/firefox/433/">FlashBlock</a>, and

@@ -107,7 +109,7 @@ href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#ExitEavesdroppers">i

 can't encrypt your traffic between the Tor network and its final

 destination.</a>

 If you are communicating sensitive information, you should use as much

-care as you would on the normal scary Internet — use SSL or other

+care as you would on the normal scary Internet — use HTTPS or other

 end-to-end encryption and authentication.

 </li>

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ users is important, and how Tor works.

 <p>

 (There are three pieces of fine print you need to know about.

 First, Tor does not protect you if you do not use it correctly.

-Read <a href="<page download>#Warnings">our list of warnings</a> and

+Read <a href="<page download>#Warning">our list of warnings</a> and

 make sure to follow the

 <a href="<page documentation>#RunningTor">instructions for your platform</a>

 carefully. Second, even if you configure and use Tor correctly,

@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ great for users, but not so good for us, since publishing success

 stories about how people or organizations are staying anonymous could be

 counterproductive.

 As an example, we talked

-to an FBI officer who explained that he uses Tor every day for his work

-—but he quickly followed up

+to an FBI officer who explained that he uses Tor every day for his

+work — but he quickly followed up

 with a request not to provide details or mention his name.

 </p>

@@ -92,8 +92,8 @@ jailed or harmed journalists all over the world.</p>

 <li>IBB/Voice of America/Radio Free Europe/Radio Free Asia</li>

 <p>The US <a href="http://www.ibb.gov/">International Broadcasting

-Bureau</a> supports Tor development Internet users in countries

-that can't get

+Bureau</a> supports Tor development Internet to help users in countries

+where they can't get

 safe access to free media.  Tor not only protects freedom of expression,

 but preserves the ability of persons behind national firewalls or under

 the surveillance of repressive regimes to view information that gives

@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ web site.</a></p>

 Africa reports that his nonprofit must budget 10% to cover various

 sorts of corruption, mostly bribes and such.  When that percentage

 rises steeply, not only can they not afford the money, but they can

-not afford to complain -- this is the point at which open objection can

+not afford to complain — this is the point at which open objection can

 become dangerous.  So his nonprofit has been working to use

 Tor to safely whistleblow on governmental corruption in order to continue

 their work more effectively and safely.</p>

@@ -256,8 +256,6 @@ of Command and Control servers.</p>

 <li>Hidden services</li>

-</ul>

-

 <p>When the Internet was designed by DARPA, its primary purpose was to

 be able to facilitate distributed, robust communications in case of

 local strikes.  However, some functions must be centralized, such as

@@ -266,6 +264,8 @@ reveal the geographic location of any server that is reachable online,

 however Tor's hidden services capacity allows military command and

 control to be physically secure from discovery and takedown.</p>

+</ul>

+

 <h2>Law enforcement officers use Tor</h2>

 <p>Undercover officers use Tor to conceal their IP address during