Update first-time.page with review feedback
Colin Childs

Colin Childs commited on 2016-10-19 05:45:59
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   <p>
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   When you run Tor Browser for the first time, you will see the Tor
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-  Launcher window. This offers you the option to connect directly to the
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+  Network Settings window. This offers you the option to connect directly to the
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   Tor network, or to configure Tor Browser for your connection.
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   </p>
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     <media type="image" width="600" src="media/first-time/connect.png" />
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     </p>
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     <p>
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-    In most cases, this option will allow you to connect to the Tor network
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+    In most cases, choosing "Connect" will allow you to connect to the Tor network
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     without any further configuration. Once clicked, a status bar will
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     appear, showing Tor’s connection progress. If you are on a relatively
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     fast connection, but this bar seems to get stuck at a certain point,
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    </p>
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    <p>
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    If you know that your connection is censored, or uses a proxy, you should
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-   select this option. Tor Launcher will take you through a series of
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+   select this option. Tor Browser will take you through a series of
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    configuration options.
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    </p>
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    <steps>
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      this is not necessary. You will usually know if you need to answer
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      “Yes”, as the same settings will be used for other browsers on your
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      system. If possible, ask your network administrator for guidance. If
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-     your connection does not use a proxy, click “Connect”.
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+     your connection does not use a proxy, click “Continue”.
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      </p>
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      <p>
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      <media type="image" width="600" src="media/first-time/proxy_question.png" />
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