@@ -411,11 +411,11 @@ physical world, while removing safe spaces for victims online.

 Meanwhile, criminals would still have access to botnets, stolen

 phones, hacked hosting accounts, the postal system, couriers, corrupt

 officials, and whatever technology emerges to trade content. They are

-early adopters of technology. In the face of this, it is dangerous or

+early adopters of technology. In the face of this, it is dangerous for

 policymakers to assume that blocking and filtering is sufficient. We

 are more interested in helping efforts to halt and prevent child

 abuse than helping politicians score points with constituents by

-hiding it. The role of corruption is especially troubling, see this

+hiding it. The role of corruption is especially troubling; see this

 United Nations report on <a

 href="http://www.unodc.org/documents/human-trafficking/2011/

 Issue_Paper_-_The_Role_of_Corruption_in_Trafficking_in_Persons.pdf">The