tor-webwml.git

@@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ wide variety of reasons: journalists and

 bloggers, human rights workers, law enforcement officers, soldiers,

 corporations, citizens of repressive regimes, and just ordinary

 citizens.  See the <a href="<page torusers>">Who Uses Tor?</a> page for

-examples of typical tor users.  See the <a href="<page overview>">overview page</a> for a

+examples of typical Tor users.

+See the <a href="<page overview>">overview page</a> for a

 more detailed explanation of what Tor does, why this diversity of

 users is important, and how Tor works.

 </p>

@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ or world religions is behind a national firewall.

 <li>

 <strong>Field Agents:</strong>

-It is not difficult for insurgents to monitor internet traffic and

+It is not difficult for insurgents to monitor Internet traffic and

 discover all the hotels and other locations from which people are

 connecting to known military servers.

 Military field agents deployed away from home use Tor to

@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ to record a military address, thereby revealing the surveillance.

 <h2><a class="anchor" href="#journalist">Journalists and their audience use Tor</a></h2>

 <ul>

 <li><strong><a href="http://www.rsf.org/">Reporters without Borders</a></strong>

-tracks internet prisoners of conscience and jailed or harmed journalists all over the world. They advise

+tracks Internet prisoners of conscience and jailed or harmed journalists all over the world. They advise

 journalists, sources, bloggers, and dissidents to use Tor to ensure their privacy and safety.

 </li>

 <li><strong>The US <a href="http://www.ibb.gov/">International Broadcasting Bureau</a></strong> 

@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ local events to encourage social change and political reform.

 </li>

 <li><strong>Citizens and journalists in <a

 href="http://www.rsf.org/rubrique.php3?id_rubrique=554">Internet black

-holes</a></strong> use Tor to research state propoganda and opposing

+holes</a></strong> use Tor to research state propaganda and opposing

 viewpoints, to file stories with non-State controlled media, and to

 avoid risking the personal consequences of intellectual curiosity.

 </li>

@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ See also their <a href="http://irrepressible.info/static/pdf/FOE-in-china-2006-l

 report</a> on China Internet issues.

 </li>

 <li><a href="http://www.globalvoicesonline.org">Global Voices</a>

-recommends Tor, especially for <strong>anonynomous blogging</strong>,

+recommends Tor, especially for <strong>anonymous blogging</strong>,

 throughout their <a href="http://www.google.com/search?q=site:www.globalvoicesonline.org+tor">

 web site.</a>

 </li>

@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ To support this, <strong>Tor currently has an open Americorps/VISTA position</st

 government grant will cover a full time stipend for a volunteer to create

 curricula to <strong>show low-income populations how to use anonymity online for

 safer civic engagement</strong>.  Although it's often said that the poor do not use

-online access for civic engagment, failing to act in their self-interests,

+online access for civic engagement, failing to act in their self-interests,

 it is our hypothesis (based on personal conversations and anecdotal

 information) that it is precisely the “permanent record ”

 left online that keeps many of the poor from speaking out on the Internet.

@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ just a good idea some of the time - it is a requirement for a free and functioni

 and so forth. It would be impossible to rehash the entire anonymity debate here - it is too large an issue with too many nuances, and there

 are plenty of other places where this information can be found. We do have a <a href="page faq-abuse">Tor abuse</a> page describing some of

 the possible abuse cases for Tor, but suffice it to say that if you want to abuse the system, you'll either find it mostly closed for your

-purposes (e.g. the majority of Tor relays do not support smtp in order to prevent anonymous email spamming), or if you're one of the

+purposes (e.g. the majority of Tor relays do not support SMTP in order to prevent anonymous email spamming), or if you're one of the

 <a href="http://www.schneier.com/blog/archives/2005/12/computer_crime_1.html">Four Horsemen of the Information Apocalypse</a>,

 you have better options than Tor. While not dismissing the potential abuses of Tor,

 this page shows a few of the many important ways anonymity is used online today.</p>