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-Anonymity is threatened as never before by trends in law, policy, and

-technology that are undermining our ability to speak and read freely

-online without being forced to reveal who we are. These trends also

-undermine national security and critical infrastructures by making

-personal, corporate, organization, and government communications more

-vulnerable. With each new user and server, we enhance Tor's ability

-to restore your control over your security and privacy.

+Ongoing trends in law, policy, and technology threaten anonymity as never

+before, undermining our ability to speak and read freely online. These

+trends also undermine national security and critical infrastructure by

+making communication among individuals, organizations, corporations,

+and governments more vulnerable to analysis. Each new user and server

+provides additional diversity, enhancing Tor's ability to put control

+over your security and privacy back into your hands.

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